True Writers Article: No और यूनिकॉर्न (Ch. 1)

posted by hgfan5602

This is my first प्रशंसक fic... and hopefully I will be continuing on this! Enjoy!

My name is Alice. I'm eleven years young. My life has been all... यूनिकॉर्न until this year. It's sort of like all the fun has been cut off from my life. Like adults and other people alike all want me to have a short childhood. It's strange, because it seems as if everyone else is having loads of excitement in their lives. But I'm the only one who is at home, trying not to cut myself everyday because of all the stress in my life. It's difficult not to, and I haven't spoke to anyone so far. I don't want to be sent to a mental hospital. I'm not mental.... am I? I think that's आप to decide and for me to find out.
All of this... drama started when a girl in our class named Stacy decided to write a note and send it to one of my BFFs, Skylar. It said, "Alice, Skylar, and Sarah... आप will definitely regret being mean to me in the end." The first thought that came to my mind was, "Why would anyone do that? Why would anyone say that? And सेकंड of all, her name is faded at the bottom of the note but it's still obvious to see. Why? Why? Why?!?! Stacy was my friend... या at least I thought she was. Why would anyone think of something so pathetic... yet something so vengeful?"
Well it turned out that she told our teacher Mrs. Harris... and she blamed it on Skylar. I didn't understand. Now Stacy was also being immature and making fun of my other best friends' hairstyles, clothes, shoes, and much more! I mean, grow up! Seriously!! Not only that... Stacy was also crying to our teacher... and making a huge sob story out of it. I was pissed... and sort of sad at how my best friend changed so much. Oh, या should I say ex best friend.

alicia386 What is this story based off of? You said it was a fan fic what story are your rewriting? Also, adorable title. The character seems a bit younger than eleven. When I was eleven the biggest thing to have ever happened was not unicorns, it was more along the lines of silly bands and who is the funniest. We were way past the unicorn stage. The story all together seems a bit fast paced as if we are rushing into a story instead of giving us more background information and then getting into the plot. Instead it is like we are jumping off a cliff and landing straight to the plot without barely any background information. All in all, it is a good start and a already interesting story. Is this a journal entry or chapter.

hgfan5602 Okay thanks for the feedback @alicia386! I will reconsider that... and maybe change some things on this story because I think it's not the best that it can be. Sort of need to revamp. But thanks! This is a chapter.. but I need some time to think about this... i'm not sure if i should continue or not

The Last Myth book four: Never Ending Journy Chapter Two: Saying Goodbye

posted by misscrazel

Aznr ran down the पहाड़ी, हिल to the edge of the cliff. fallen trees scattered the ground and there was no sign of life. Aznr's hair blew back in the wind and memories of the past filled his head...

*Flashback*

Aznr heard a scream that rang through the forest.
Airellion! he thought, immediately recognizing his voice.
'Aznr! LightWater!' he heard the scream again.
This time he ran through the forest towards him. Aznr burst into the clearing and saw Airellion. He had an ऐरो in his throat and one in his arm. He was surrounded द्वारा an army of goblins, all heavily armed.
'Airellion!' called Aznr.
Aznr raised...

I have no idea what to call this. O.O But it's chapter one.

posted by -SilverFey-

Just a few things before the story; one, if there's something आप don't like about it, please tell me! I want it to be as good as it can be. ^-^ Just please tell me in a respectful way, please. I would appreciate that. Thank you.
Also, this story will be a little (well, और than a little) bloody and violent, and there may be some cussing later on. Just a warning.
That being said, I hope आप like it!
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Gnarled branches. Green leaves grew from them—green leaves spotted with yellows and reds. They rustled dryly, talking of the upcoming season of autumn....

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आप Can Never Have Everything या Tales of a Group of Outcasts Chapter Nine

posted by Sylvia_Puffin

Ash
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I hurried down the hall, keeping an eye out for Tonia. God, how was I supposed to ask the girl out if I couldn’t find her?
    Out of the corner of my eye I saw movement. I glanced that way, thinking it could be Tonia.
    No, it was just Zoë. She swept out of the bathroom and down the hall. It looked like she was crying.
    “Hey. Zoë,” I called. She didn’t look back.
    I moaned and hurried after her, caught up with her. Then...

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आप Can Never Have Everything या Tales of a Group of Outcasts Chapter Seven

posted by Sylvia_Puffin

Quin's point of view.
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“I’m dropping out of school,” I announced, slamming open my locker.
    “Why?” Lisa asked, glanced up from stuffing a jacket, a pocketbook, and a stuffed hippo into her backpack.
    “Why do आप think?” I asked. “My secret’s out. I need to drop out of school.”
    Lisa rolled her eyes. “Quin, you’re taking this way too seriously. This is one of those things that everyone teases आप about for one day, and the अगला day...

The Brain Game (short story)

posted by alicia386

I ventured out into the forest. My mission is simple. I must find the woman who gives out free wishes. It was a long journey but the mere thought of what is to come kept me going.

The और I kept walking, the stranger the path got. The trees became short and pink, the sky turned a light pink, and the घास turned soft as silk. I was near her cave.

"Queen of beauty, luck, and love, दिखाना your face to me!" I shouted at the heavens hoping she would come out.

"Who's there?" A whispery voice asked me while I searched for the keeper of the voice.

"It is me, Jason Hills," I कहा to the sky. "I have come...

Feay: Wings of Flaming Hope Ch.6

posted by Blitz359

The light dimmed, and the first thing Garren notices is the cold, hard ground. Then he notices the howling wind. Then there was the 800 foot drop in front of him....Wait, what?

Garren scrambled back, trying to put as much distance in between him and the cliff edge. Once he was no longer in danger of falling and splattering his guts all over the rocks, he noticed one और thing. His wounds no longer hurt.

Garren lifted his shirt. All of the cuts and bruises the gryphon had दिया him had all magically healed. He wondered if the voice had anything to do with this. As if on cue, कहा voice began...

2115 chapter 2 - All Innocents

posted by SilverWings13

"Sethus!" William shouted as he neared the double doors of the sky-scraper. Militiamen stood in a line at attention, modified rifles in their hands. They were garbed in the same black uniforms, armor, and helmets as William and his troops. One of them stepped out of line. He wore a red band around his upper arm.

"Sir?" the youth said.

"Command your men to stand down and retreat."

Without arguing या hesitating, Sethus shouted the orders to his men and ran through the double doors. William waited until every man was inside before he followed.

Civilians in business सूट्स were rushing out the back...

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This is an origional song. Please read,It's a प्यार song (obviously) called "La-la love" Enjoy!

posted by Imyselfandme

When I see you,I don't know what to say
I think of you,just about everyday
When your around hysterical,it's unpredictable...with me,I try to be serious,buts it's no use...

(Chorus) When I look at you,I turn away,When I hear your name,I try a different way, (fast) Your smile is alluring,and your eyes always occuring on my mind, If I explain I'll go insane,so I'll keep my mind blank,The एंन्जल्स are jealous about आप from up above,and though आप dont know it;you always give me La-la love,yeah,La-la love

When I sing,to me,you play the music,Im intrigued-sing with me,oh oh
When I dance आप आप dance too,In everything I do,To me,Your here,so what Im having fantasies,who cares?

(Chorus)

My दिल is pounding,No sound surrounds me,exept your velvety voice...I'll say it once again,Your the संगीत in my head,I can't build up to it any other way,Ive already done as much as I may...

(Chorus) LA,la,la,la,la आप give me...love

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Kind stranger, I am free (poem)

posted by Problematic129

*So I really don't know where this came from, it just popped in my head. It's a bit sad, but I hope आप enjoy. I dedicate this to all kind people and people who are having hard times. Please don't copy, टिप्पणियाँ and प्रशंसकों would be lovely*
These are tears, tears that I cry
    They leak down my face, from my raining eye
    The pain, how it hurts, oh if it wasn’t so
    My life could be easy, my life could be nice
    But yet I’m still writhing, stuck in the ice
    I feel so cold, as I scream and...

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The Deadly Truth Ch. 11

posted by alicia386

Chapter 11: When It All Comes To An End

Senior Year
This was the most legendary party ever. All of the seniors were invited to meet up at Glynn Academy. They was going to throw the wildest and most illegal party ever and it was all thanks to Jason Rivers, Jena Ross, Joseph Knight, Marco Martinez and Carter Stone. They all were in the D.B.E together या Drive द्वारा Enterprises. Sammy Mitchell had chosen Jason who chosen his फ्रेंड्स to be apart of this business.
This business was to help make the world a better place. If someone has a problem with somebody else, आप have to kill that...

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Everything Eden #2: The Final पुस्तकें of the Eden Chronicles

posted by dragonsmemory

Welcome all to the सेकंड issue of Everything Eden, your स्रोत for…well, everything Eden. In this issue, we'll be looking at the finall six पुस्तकें of the Eden Chronicles. These six volumes tell of love, life, death, and hatred. Let's have a look.

A LITTLE BIT और THAN LOVE
As this volume has been discussed many times, it is not necessary to reveal anything here.

RISE OF THE DEMONS
Young Areana grew up sheltered from the battles her parents fought. Now, with the demons rising, new threats will make themselves known.

ROKUJO'S REVOLUTION
This book deals with the Failed Revolution. Crown Prince...

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The Deadly Truth Ch. 10

posted by alicia386

One और chapter left!

Chapter 10: Do आप Swear to Tell the Truth and Nothing But the Truth

Simone stared wide eyed through the bars locking her into the cell. It was the only thing that kept her from snapping everyone's heads off. The guard was gone but replaced द्वारा another man. He was tall, muscular, and had the most unscrupulous grin on his face. It made Simone feel extremely uncomfortable. He had jet black hair and light green eyes. His eyes were sincere at time when he looked at her, but other times he made the hairs on the back of Simone's neck stand up. She didn't like this guy...

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Inspired:Embracing hope

posted by Problematic129

Part 10!!! I'm so sorry for the delay, but I had school, I'm now in high school! Freshman! So it was really time consuming, but I couldn't let आप down, I own nothing, all these pictures are not mine. There here fro the main purpose to inspire आप and put that smile right back on your face. Renew your faith, laugh at the sky, smile forever, and never cry. I believe in आप guys, I प्यार आप guys, आप are awesome, beautiful, amazing, cool, and you. And I don't need a picture of आप to know that, don't let them take आप down. In the end be the one standing and never lose hope. I won nothing. Enjoy!

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The Bandanna Twins Chapter 2

posted by tinaloo

A/N: here's chapter 2 of my story

So for 8 years the Twins where kept inside there घर with no connection to the outside world. They had learned How to control there powers when they where 8. They kept on getting stronger each दिन that they practiced, they practiced 2 times a week.

The now 12 साल old girl sighed looking out the window, she wished one दिन that she could go outside and meet people her own Age.

"What's wrong?" she turned around to see her brother Flame. "nothing, its just I want to go out there." her brother sighed as well "yeah me to, I want to see this land and the people. Frosta...

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Awkward Situation #3563

posted by alicia386

(i thought this would be a very interesting teenage short story to tell. FYI i completely made this up on the spot. i have a very creative mind)

It was that perfect moment. My boyfriend, Liam, and I were just causually on the सोफ़ा, सोफे watching another episode of America's अगला चोटी, शीर्ष Model. I was watching it for the fashion and he was watching it for the girls although he would never admit it. We were just sitting their having fun and sometimes makeouting but आप dont need all the details.

His tan arm was around me and i was laying my head on his chest. I thought nothing could possible ruin this moment...

Change या be Changed: chapter 3-4

posted by IlovePatch97

im gonna be away so here is 2 chapters for you. please comment, it will make me a better writter. Thank आप :D

CHAPTER 3

I woke up to an extremely bright sun in my face and hot sand in my hair. I must not have been in the sun for long because I hadn't burnt yet. I could hear the sound of human laughter but it felt like it was coming from the inside of my head, all I could smell was smoke from a camp fire. I rolled over and pushed myself up off the sand and I looked around, still trying to figure out what happened. All I remembered was the egg, the flash of colour, and feeling I was falling from...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.11

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
11
    Terry
    “Just tell us!”
    “I already told you! I don’t remember!” Stilere yelled. “All I remember is having this headache and something and then when I was walking this weird feeling and then I opened my eyes…but I know something happened, I just can’t remember!”
    Zaria opened her mouth to say something else but I cut her off. “If she doesn’t remember, she doesn’t remember. Were just gonna have to…jog her memory back, yeah, that’s it.”
    “And...

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Eye of the beholder chapter 3

posted by 1999jacko

3 miles away

Gemini woke from his sleep, his wand in his hand with an old brown tendril half out of it as though he had been fighting someone. He slowly कहा under his breath," samantanes," his voice rough and gravely from a thousand years of unconscious, after a सेकंड of waiting a huge water hand shot from his body clearing his way backup to the surface. He grabbed the wand and jumped up onto the surface as 18 of his ( former) captors came towards him tendrils flying everywhere. He could see the fiery robes of his worst enemy Virgo at the front, but as they ran आगे Gemini saw the flabby...

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My Dreams Are Heard (rock song)

posted by hgfan5602

Sometimes I have this feeling
Right here deep in my heart
A feeling that is steady, pounding against my soul
A feeling that I write but can't complete

Oh, I want my dreams and hopes to be heard
I can't hide my feelings any longer
No one's gonna stop me from doing what I want
They will not be pushed aside

Now I'm done believing what आप told me about
I have no trust या faith in आप anymore
And it's time for me to follow my dreams
To stand tall and scream out my lungs

Listen to me and the story I will tell.....
I was just sitting द्वारा the bedside
Staring at the world outside of my home
And it changed my life,...

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चार्म्ड and Dangerous Ch. 4

posted by alicia386

Chapter Four: Do All Teenagers Go Through What I Go Through

Raven Millan was the daughter of the double agent Marcus Millan. He is notorious for sending information to Germany while pretending to be loyal to the U.S. He told Germany all about what was going on in Area 51. Germany learned how to use that information against us and we almost went into a World War 3. Last I heard, he was going to be दिया the electric chair. My dad was supervising Millan when the government found out about the betrayal. My dad had told me everything because we have this open relationship and he tells me...