Tiva प्रशंसक Fiction Article: My TFFF Contribution for Round 2 "ETERNAL FLAME (Tony, I'm Pregnant)"

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My TFFF Contribution for Round 2 "ETERNAL FLAME (Tony, I'm Pregnant)"

posted by BarbaraCocaCola

Her hands are trembeling, her eyes are closed and she takes the deepest breath that she ever taked before. She opens her eyes. Positive.
-Damn!!! -She says.
Tony comes into the bathroom and smiles to her.
-Hey. -He says.
-Hey! -Ziva says faking a grin and hiding the pregnancy test behind her back.
-It's everything alrigth, Zee-vah?
-Yeah, it is everything fine, why are आप asking that?...
-You're weird.
-No I am not.... I've got to go...-She runs to the door and he grabs her harm.
The pregnancy test falls on the floor.
-Zi, what's that?
-Nothing... I've got to go...
She runs away and lets him with his दिल pounding...
-Was that a... -He asks to himself. -...No it can't be!!!
Ziva is in the elevator. God, she has to tell him... but first, she'll tell Abby. Maybe it will be easier.
-Hey, Ziva!!! -Abby says adjusting a ponytail.-Everything OK?
-No Abby!!! I can't say this of another way... so here it goes: I'm pregnant.
Abby गूगल her big greenish eyes and says:
-What? Really... I am so happy!!!! -She holds Ziva in her harms. -Wait... Who's the father?
-It's him....
-Him? Him who?
-Shhhh... Please don't shout! Him...-She whispers.
-Oh, Tony... -Abby whispers too. -Wait TONY? OUR TONY!? TONY DINOZZO!!! -Abby screams.
-Shhh... yes that Tony, our Tony, Tony DiNozzo.
-Oh my god! How did that happen?
-Abby, I think आप know how these things happen, no?!!!
-No, I mean when? Where?!!!!
-Paris...
-Paris... but आप कहा that आप take the सोफ़ा, सोफे in Paris!
-Yeah, we both did...
-Ziva, why did आप lie....?
-It was only a nigth, a escape of everything.... but it felt so rigth...
-I knew it, I knew it... आप like him!!! It was not 'only a nigth' it was 'the nigth'. आप प्यार him, don't you?
-No, no, no... ok, maybe... I do. God, Abby how will I tell him?
-That's easy: TONY, I'M PREGNANT!
In that precise moment Tony comes in:
-Abby, you're pregnant?
-No, no... Not me...-Abby says quickly.
-Tony, I'm pregnant. -Ziva says.
-I'm going... now... -Abby says.-You need to... do that... blah blah thing... i'm going... now... bye.
The room stays in silence.
-So... who is the father? -Tony asks, his eyes staring at her.
-Tony, आप are the father.
Once again the silence rests in the room. It's a cold and sharp silence, as a knife. And it hurts, she's waiting for him to say something, and that hurts.
-Ziva, I...
-Sorry, I should know before that आप would never assume this child... I should know that... -Tears start to fall, and her voice is sad and hurt.-... that...that was only a nigth...
-Ziva... That was not only a nigth, that was special, unic. And I will assume my kid, our kid. And आप know why? Because I प्यार you, and now it is I who I am sorry, I should have told आप this before. Do आप प्यार me?
Her दिल is beating so... is this real? Oh, god, she hope that is. She knows that is.
-Give me your hand. -She says, and he holds her hand that she leads in the direction of her chest.
There a संगीत starts playing "Close your eyes, give me your hand... Do आप feel my दिल beating, do आप understand?"
-ABBY!!!-Ziva says.
-Sorry, sorry, I'm going, now, realy...
He feels her दिल beating.
-I'm tottaly exposed to you. This is hard for me. To दिखाना my feelings.
-What do आप feel?
-No. What do आप feel?
-I feel a heart, a very strong heart, and it's beating और than ever... So what does it means?
Ziva approximates her lips to him. He leans and approximates his lips to her too. Nobody wants to be the last to taste it, so exactly at the same time, like they share a heart, a body and a soul their lips touch first softly and then और strong, and और and more.
The संगीत starts playing again: "Is this burning? An eternal flame..."
Finnaly they stop and concerted they say:
-ABBY!!!!
-What?
-You're going to be godmother....
-YAY!!!!

lovelife93, BoNeS-h0uSe and 3 others like this

ziva_rocks So cute Barbara, i love it :)

mossheart1235 I loved this part... -ABBY!!!! -What? -You're going to be godmother.... -YAY!!!! It's so good!

NCIS_Addict_87 The ending was my favorite part... that's totally Abby to stick around. lol

Char30 Awww this is so adorable. I totally agree with you NCIS_Addict_87. Its not like abby 2 miss a good show :P Well done

BarbaraCocaCola Thanks very much girls =)

Ms_Montana Very cute!

BarbaraCocaCola Thank you Jenna i love your TFFF contribution too =)

iheartwheaterly so,cute,i havent even posted 1 yet bcause i dont understand! I know im not that bright.

Char30 you are bright iheartwheaterly!! every1 is ok. I havent posted 1 either, bt im on my way doing so.

BarbaraCocaCola You are all brigth, girls =)

BoNeS-h0uSe so cute!!!

zivaannmarie I love the story,love how Abby is played in this because I could so see Abby doing this

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Why Is It You?-Chapter 2

posted by iheartwheaterly

Here's the follow up.
DISCLAIMER-As many of आप already know,my name is not Don Belisario. Therefore,I do not have any control over NCIS. I do not own the characters. I don't own Paranormal Activity either.
Ziva's POV...
I skimmed through the journal. He had quite the vocabulary.
JOURNAL
I can't help but प्यार her. I can't do a lot of things. Like sweep her off her feet. I'm such an idiot! Michael made her happy. I should've just let him kill me. Maybe she'd be happy.
Narrator's POV...
Ziva heard the bathroom door open. Using her ninja skills,she spread herself out on the bed.
"Hi,Tony." she कहा in...

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Saving Her Life, Saving His दिल (Chapter 3)

posted by BarbaraCocaCola

Carry आप Home-James Blunt

He is walking for over two hours.
-Damn! I'll never find her... -Tony says.
He see a man, first he looks just like another man, but there is something in his eyes that disturbs him.
Tony follows him, the man runs to a corner where there is an old swimming pool.
They are in a dark and wet room, the same dark and wet room where Ziva was. But she's not there, Tony doesn't see her. He only sees the man, with that evil eyes pointing his gun.
-Looking for someone?-The man asked.
-Where's she?!
-She? Who?
-Ziva. I know that आप have her...
-Your little friend is not here.
In the...

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और than That

posted by iheartwheaterly

Here is a little something I have written. I know आप guys might be sick of me लेखन Tony's POV,but I just get a kick out of his thoughts! Some of this stuff might be a little off,it is about Tony's mom's side of the family. Disclaimer-the usual,dont own it,but want it.

I stepped through the doors of my Aunt Eleanor's house,thinking of what to say.

"Tony,where are we?" Ziva asked as she furrowed her brows.
"My childhood." I answered.

Ziva shut the car door and ran to my side. She stepped in only to be checked out द्वारा my younger cousin Rooney. He was only 12.

"Anthony DiNozzo Jr.,where have...

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Agents in प्यार

posted by iheartwheaterly

I own nothing , including the people this article.

The sound of knocking on the door woke her up.She had dreamed that Tony finally कहा the words, I प्यार you.Ziva got up and limped to the door,she opened it and it was Tony. He had brought her coffee.''Hey, sleepy head.'' he कहा with a cute smile.She opened the door and कहा ''Thanks.''

He gave her a grin, and asked ''What did ya dream about?'' She looked up at him with a confused look. ''Come on everybody dreams about deep secrets, what was yours?'' ''A man.'' She कहा with a smirk. He dug in his जैकेट pocket ,and pulled out her favorite...

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if आप give a girl a gun

posted by NCISCHIK

If आप give a girl a gun,

She'll want something to shoot.

So you'll have to get her a target.

While she's shooting, she'll remember her first mission.

She'll also start remembering her first partner,

And she'll want to find out how he's doing.

So you'll get a McProbie to hack into Mossad,

So she can find out where to send a letter.

As she's लेखन the letter, she'll remember that time she killed a man with a pen.

She will chuckle to herself, and you'll ask what's so funny.

She'll tell आप it is nothing, and she will finish the letter.

You will walk down to the mail room together,

But on the way,

She will...

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Observing [[Not for TFFF b/c it's too long]]

posted by NCIS_Addict_87

Disclaimer: Unfortunately I don't own NCIS. So disclaimed.

My therapist told me that if आप want to inspect something thoroughly simply hold it in your hands. It slows us down द्वारा affecting our perception. When he कहा it I laughed and asked him “What am I suppose to do? Grab the girl and slowly twirl her around while never releasing my grip?” Ha! And he thinks I’m the one in need of a therapist.

10:00 pm

It was funny… all the things आप noticed about a person if आप watched them long enough. The small things; some done out of habit and some done when they thought no one else was watching....

Agent Chronicles (Cast List!) (+) Means OC

posted by NCISJess

Author's Note: This is my first shot at publishing a work of fan-fiction on my own. I प्यार to write and Role Play. I hope this comes out well.

The Cast सूची in my fic is located here:

NOTE: I have added characters who are deceased on the दिखाना to add और depth to the story and provide a good balance between Good/Bad Guys

DISCLAIMER: I own nothing, except My Own OC’s, which will make appearances throughout this work.

NCIS:

Leon Vance (Director, NCIS)
Ross W. Plant (Assistant Director, NCIS) +

(SAIC) L. J. Gibbs
(Sr. Agent) Anthony D. DiNozzo
(Jr. Agent) Timothy McGee
(Field Agent) Dwight J....

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black बेल्ट vs assassin chapter 3

posted by NCISCHIK

chapter 3 yay i realy like the way this is going but i really want to know what आप guy want also
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tony’s pov
Loud संगीत was blaring in the apartment when he knocked on the door when they finally opened the door the girls were mad even और mad then they were before and when he got up the nerve to ask if he could come in he was hit on the back of the head hard
That is when they registered the ding and there furious expressions turned to livid ones
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ziva and abby ‘s pov before tony arrived
When...

sister,sister authors note ( HELP)

posted by NCISCHIK

i need help cus i have writers block and i need help chapter 2 was complet crap so some one give me ideas
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter या try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter

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WHEN PASSING NOTES GOES WRONG

posted by NCISCHIK

OK WE WERE IN CLASS AND IT WAS THE दिन WE HAD TO TAKE THAT RETARDED A.C.T. TEST I DONT KNOW WHY WE HAVE TO DO THIS IN 8TH GRADE IT IS JUST STUPID BUT THE POINT IS THAT WE DID AND OUR ROOM WAS DONE AND WE WERE ALLOWED TO PASS NOTES AND THE WE GOT IN TROUBLE FOR MAKING THEM INTO PAPER BALLS AND THROWING THEM AT EACH OTHER SO THEN ONE KIDS YELLED OUT "WHEN PASSING NOTES GOES WRONG'" AND ALL I THOUGHT ABOUT WAS TIVA SO HERE IT IS BTW I GOT MY COMPUTER STUCK ON ALL कैप्स SO PLEASE IGNORE IT AND IF आप KNOW HOW TO FIX IT THEN PLEASE TELL ME (OH AND I DID TRY THE टोपी BOTTON HEATHER SO DONT GO THERE...

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[Coming Home, My Love] - Chapter 3: Tonight

posted by ahmoniqued

A/N: I apologise for the delay between the chapters, I've had exams and alot of school stuff do. Thank आप for everyone who has reviewed, added my story as an alert या favourite and read it. I apologise if I have any spelling mistakes या whatever, despite me being fairly good at English, I often miss things when I reread my work. Enjoy!
Disclaimer: I do not own NCIS.
Song: Tonight द्वारा Enrique Iglesias featuring Ludacris.
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[Coming Home, My Love] - Chapter 2: In My Veins

posted by ahmoniqued

A/N: Thank आप everyone who reviewed,you all rock! Y'all definitely brought a smile to my face, the और feedback – the fast I update. Apologies for any spelling या grammar mistakes, just eager to get this ओवन and done with and didn't spellcheck – will do later. Advice? Listen to song while reading, gets आप into my state of mind.
Disclaimer: I do not own NCIS.
Song: In My Veins द्वारा Andrew Belle.

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[Coming Home, My Love] - Chapter 1: Innocent.

posted by ahmoniqued

A/N: This is how I expect the November Two-Parter to go in my mind, without any reference to any of the current spoilers. This is my first Tiva/NCIS fiction and my first time to write in third person, so, be kind to me – I’m new to this. I प्यार feedback and how to improve my writing, especially since लेखन this was kind of my preparation for my English exam. This may not be exciting but I promise to make it as better as the story goes further – it is a four/fiveshot.

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It was a cold Friday night where the moon hung in the sky which illuminated the city, accompanied द्वारा the stars and...

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From Hebrew to Italian to प्यार *FOR THE TFFF*

posted by mossheart1235

OKAY. HERE'S THE DEALIO.

THIS TOOK FOREVER FOR ME TO WRITE. HEBREW IS SOOOO CONFUSING. I HATE गूगल TRANSLATE. ANYHOO, IF SOMETHING'S WRONG, CORRECT ME.

I KNOW THERE ARE NO QUOTATION MARkS. SORRY. NOT ADDING 'EM ALL IN.

ENJOY.

Tony was bored. Really, really bored. There were no cases, only mountains of paperwork. Stealing a glance hat his brilliant ninja partner, he noticed she was simply sitting there, as bored as he was, also. He grinned and shot her an IM.
שלום זיוה (Hello Ziva)
She gave him a strange look at his use of Hebrew but answered him anyway.
Cosa vuoi, Tony? (What do आप want,...

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Chapter 8 - A Million Little Pieces

posted by NCIS_Addict_87

Another sleepless night, another note, another दिन without Ziva. He didn’t know if he could deal with anything other than another rescue. He folded & unfolded the paper in his hands, replaying the words in his head – Flight 646 6:20 pm accompanied द्वारा the words आप won’t want to miss this. He looked at the clock… only 8:45 am. What the hell was he supposed to do for the अगला 9.5 hours?

McGee and Abby stood around the corner, out of Tony’s line of sight whispering quietly. “Timmy he doesn’t look good. He hasn’t slept, he won’t eat and he hasn’t even showered. I’m starting...

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*TFFF ENTRY!!!!!!*-"Contents, priceless"

posted by soccergal39

so I'm dead tired right now, but i have NO other time to write before the deadline, and i have no idea what I'm लेखन yet, so here goes nothing. ;P sorry if it's too ooc for some of ya, but it just worked out better.

Disclaim: if i ran ncis, tiva would have happened in season three, so i obviously don't own it. ;( plus, Michael would have had to suffer A WHOLE HECK UVULA LOT और THAN HE DID!---sorry, I'm in a really anti-rivkin mood. ;/

******Friday morning.**********

Ziva heard the faint ping of an elevator approaching the squad room floor. she adverted her eager eyes to the स्रोत of the...

Tiva प्रशंसक Fiction Fest, My Entry! Round 3 [I'm observing you, Tony]- "Bitter and Blue" द्वारा Tegan

posted by freshfunkpride

कड़वा and Blue- 1462 words

Tony had been अभिनय strange for the whole day.

It was almost like he didn’t want to work.

Not that that was weird for Tony, as normally he spent his hours lounging back on his डेस्क chair and shooting spitballs at McGee. But this time…it was different. It was almost like he was late for something. He was trying to use any excuse he could think of to get out of the office. Ziva’s mind worked in overdrive.

At midday

The sun beat down on their backs as Ziva clicked the camera around the crime scene.

“DiNozzo,” barked Gibbs, “Go to your...

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happiness for some, pain for all.

posted by soccergal39

----"Can't unsay what आप hearrdd....'cause आप heard me right. And i won't try to fight 'em back या hide my feelings for you, I unapologiizee!"--Carrie Underwood, unapologize. aka, best song EVER! seriously, I will give आप प्रॉप्स once i figure out how if आप listen to that song!!!!

disclaim: Don't own एन सी आइ एस#Naval Criminal Investigative Service या anything but some dvds and the reruns i watch. या songs. sorry, it's the sad truth ;( ONE DAY, Don Bellisario!

****Friday Morning****

---"Why hello, my overly late partner! May i ask why आप are late?" the womanizing movie freak that was tony dinozzo inquired of his partner.

"see, that depends....

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I Believe

posted by mossheart1235

She can't sleep. She tosses and turns, flips, and falls off the बिस्तर sometimes, but she doesn't sleep. All she can see, all she will ever see, is the tears that बादल her vision as the blood spills from his chest.
It has only been two hours and she has already cried enough tears to fill the Nile River twice over. The whole team has tried so hard, but she will never, EVER forget the look on his face as he realises what is to come.
She hates it. She hates everything. Everything that has ever caused her pain. Ari. Michael. Her father. Saleem. And now, this.
She sees the explosion. It replays, over...