Book Review: The Son of Neptune द्वारा Rick Riordan

ok so this is chapter 1 of a fanfic I've been लेखन and I want to see if it is any good. If I get alot of positive responses I will continue it and post this as a forum. This is my first fanfic so go easy on me!
-Sapphire

Rating: Probably YA, just to be safe

Disclaimer: All the characters, except for Selena Forrest, belong to Rick Riordan, the amazing writter of Percy Jackson and the one who inspired us all

A/N: As I have stated before, this is my first fanfic and is probably horrible. I say probably because I do not know which is why I am posting this. If I get alot of good टिप्पणियाँ I will continue...

So I was writting a टिप्पणी दे for a pic called "Fixed it!" (link) and I realised that with the little I already knew, I could spread it out into a whole darn article! So I did...

Anyways, here's my point. What the Greeks didn't invent in their time; they made better. What the Romans didn't conquer या destroy, they passed onto us. Some of it died over the years, like their language Latin, but some of it stays with us, even now, in 2011.

Months

January - "Janus" - Janus is the gods of begginings and doors, and starts and finishes and choices. The first महीना of...

Hi This is partypony.
There's this song, and my फ्रेंड्स keep गाना it all day. The song is Fireworks, द्वारा Katy Perry. Now it's stuck in my head practically all the time. So about a week ago, I made a song fic featuring Fireworks. I didn't really plan to actually प्रकाशित करे this here, but I got bored so...

FIREWORKS; द्वारा KATY PERRY
songfic written द्वारा partypony
(this is so that we know what Annabeth was feeling when she went on the mission to rescue Percy. That was in my fanfic, chapter 30, when Carmen was गाना some songs).

Annabeth's PoV

Carmen, daughter of Apollo (Roman) tried to cheer us up द्वारा singing...

I'm going to cut the crap and get right to this, we have highly annoying prophecies. I need no और evidence than every piece of लेखन Rick Riordan has ever produced, okay that sounds a bit gross but anyway, our Son of Neptune unfinished prophecies and clues.

'To rescue the legion's crown,
The son of Neptune shall drown,'

Okay, this is just me but I'm guessing the prophecy was unfinished SINCE IT कहा IT IN THE BOOK. Percy rescued the eagle (the legion's crown) and he drowned-er, something, mainly ghosts. Moving on,

'Wisdom's daughter walks alone,
The Mark of Athena burns through Rome,'

We know...

I DO NOT OWN THE PJO SIERES या THE HOO SIERIES!
chapter 1 annabeth
we were flying through the skys on the argo 2 that morning it just got finished yesterday ow i am glad thay finished it but now there were bigger problems to face like how the romans and greeks would get along, या if it ended badly, या if percy is actully at this camp या .... if percy..............forgot abought me. woa! what am i thinking? of course that seaweed brain will remember me! i hope that seconed piper came on the deck she was wearing her snow boarding जैकेट as usual. leo is making a iris meassage for the roman camp...