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Chapter Fourteen
Piper
As I hit the ground, (thank you for that Jason!) I saw a glimpse of a horrible sight. All I saw was Jason on the ground bleeding. Why did he do that? I heard somebody scream, to suprise I found it was my own voice. I ran to Jason and examined his body. He had a gash from his elbow to his shoulder, and it was oozing blood. I was too focused on Jason to notice what was happening as far as the basilisk. I ripped my jacket and rapped it around Jason's arm. I pulled him aside. I didn't say anything to him, I cound't find the words. I put pressure on his arm but it was still pretty bad...he needed stitches and some serious bandaging. Oh god, what if he didn't make? That would be my fault, I cound't let that happen! I held down Jason's arm and waited. That's all could do was wait. I had no material. But once we did, I could treat him, I have first aid training... After many minutes of ducking, weaving and striking the basilsk, (I couldn't see everything through the tiny mirror) Annabeth wiped around with her eyes closed and stapped it straight in the head. It wailed in agony. And then plopped itself onto the ground. It was dead. Annabeth and Leo finally looked over, as soon as they saw they rushed towards us. "Leo could you happen to pull a first aid kit out of that magical belt of yours?" I asked sarcastically. Leo jammed his hand into the belt. "Nope, sorry." Leo said as he pulled his hand out frm the belt. "Okay, heres what we do, Annabeth and I go in to the temple as fast we can, do what we need to, if we go, Zeus might do something eldse that's totally dangerous. Leo, you stay here with Jason after we come out, we go into town and ask for a first aid kit. Comprendo?" I spoke with much more confedience than I had. Leo took my place and Annabeth and I sprinted to the Temple. It was huge. We walked in, filled with caution. There was mosaic, everywhere. Doves, swan, and a huge statue of Aphrodite. I prayed to Aphrodite. Annabeth thought it would be more likely that she would answer our prayers if I did it, me being her daughter and everthing. A moment passed and then another then everything went black.
Leo
I was just lookin' around when it suddenly became really, really dark. Or if you want to call it, it went black.
Piper
I woke up. I looked beside me, asking Annabeth what happend. But it wasn't Annabeth I saw. It was a balck haired, blue eyed girl. "Who the heck are-" I began to question. "It's me Annabeth." her voice was completely different. I took the mirror I used to fight the basilisk. I was a blonde with brown eyes. I looked at Annabeth. She understood and began to explain. "I changed our appearence so we could look like Jason's Roman friends. That's why I cam to Aphrodite's temple, godess of BEAUTY!And love. She could change our appearences, so when we go to the Roman camp they trust us more because we're Roman and with Jason so they believe us more." I thought about this but a question pooped up in my mind. "But if Jason wasn't going with us how would you think of this plan?" Annabeth nodded. " I knew he was going to come, because you came. You see, you're not just good for being friends with. Jason would come because of you" I stood there shocked. "Why did you fall?" She smiled."To make it convincing, and 'cause they threw a rock at me." We laughed. "Why didn't we jus go with Jason, and say we're his friends and we're Roman." I asked curiously. "Because Percy might reconize me." she said with hope but also dispair."So for now on, I'm Amber, you're Vicotria, and Leo is Dylan." I just relized this. "Leo got transformed also!" Annabeth and I ran out. Leo looked at us like we were crazy. Annabeth explained it on the way to the town. "Your a thinker, Annabeth." Leo said. Annabeth nodded with pride.
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Sorry! I know it's short! I just had to write about Annabeth, Piper, Jason and Leo. I kept putting it off. :)
Chapter Fourteen
Piper
As I hit the ground, (thank you for that Jason!) I saw a glimpse of a horrible sight. All I saw was Jason on the ground bleeding. Why did he do that? I heard somebody scream, to suprise I found it was my own voice. I ran to Jason and examined his body. He had a gash from his elbow to his shoulder, and it was oozing blood. I was too focused on Jason to notice what was happening as far as the basilisk. I ripped my jacket and rapped it around Jason's arm. I pulled him aside. I didn't say anything to him, I cound't find the words. I put pressure on his arm but it was still pretty bad...he needed stitches and some serious bandaging. Oh god, what if he didn't make? That would be my fault, I cound't let that happen! I held down Jason's arm and waited. That's all could do was wait. I had no material. But once we did, I could treat him, I have first aid training... After many minutes of ducking, weaving and striking the basilsk, (I couldn't see everything through the tiny mirror) Annabeth wiped around with her eyes closed and stapped it straight in the head. It wailed in agony. And then plopped itself onto the ground. It was dead. Annabeth and Leo finally looked over, as soon as they saw they rushed towards us. "Leo could you happen to pull a first aid kit out of that magical belt of yours?" I asked sarcastically. Leo jammed his hand into the belt. "Nope, sorry." Leo said as he pulled his hand out frm the belt. "Okay, heres what we do, Annabeth and I go in to the temple as fast we can, do what we need to, if we go, Zeus might do something eldse that's totally dangerous. Leo, you stay here with Jason after we come out, we go into town and ask for a first aid kit. Comprendo?" I spoke with much more confedience than I had. Leo took my place and Annabeth and I sprinted to the Temple. It was huge. We walked in, filled with caution. There was mosaic, everywhere. Doves, swan, and a huge statue of Aphrodite. I prayed to Aphrodite. Annabeth thought it would be more likely that she would answer our prayers if I did it, me being her daughter and everthing. A moment passed and then another then everything went black.
Leo
I was just lookin' around when it suddenly became really, really dark. Or if you want to call it, it went black.
Piper
I woke up. I looked beside me, asking Annabeth what happend. But it wasn't Annabeth I saw. It was a balck haired, blue eyed girl. "Who the heck are-" I began to question. "It's me Annabeth." her voice was completely different. I took the mirror I used to fight the basilisk. I was a blonde with brown eyes. I looked at Annabeth. She understood and began to explain. "I changed our appearence so we could look like Jason's Roman friends. That's why I cam to Aphrodite's temple, godess of BEAUTY!And love. She could change our appearences, so when we go to the Roman camp they trust us more because we're Roman and with Jason so they believe us more." I thought about this but a question pooped up in my mind. "But if Jason wasn't going with us how would you think of this plan?" Annabeth nodded. " I knew he was going to come, because you came. You see, you're not just good for being friends with. Jason would come because of you" I stood there shocked. "Why did you fall?" She smiled."To make it convincing, and 'cause they threw a rock at me." We laughed. "Why didn't we jus go with Jason, and say we're his friends and we're Roman." I asked curiously. "Because Percy might reconize me." she said with hope but also dispair."So for now on, I'm Amber, you're Vicotria, and Leo is Dylan." I just relized this. "Leo got transformed also!" Annabeth and I ran out. Leo looked at us like we were crazy. Annabeth explained it on the way to the town. "Your a thinker, Annabeth." Leo said. Annabeth nodded with pride.
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Sorry! I know it's short! I just had to write about Annabeth, Piper, Jason and Leo. I kept putting it off. :)
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