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Chapter Two
Percy
Percy was freaked out he couldn't even remember his last name, it scared him. When he tried to remember anything he kept thinking that the necklace he was wearing was a clue. It had clay beads on it; the oldest one was black with a trident and the newest had a building on it, he thought for a moment, the Empire State Building. For some reason the name gave him a sense of loss. What the giant brown wolf said didn't help, it wasn't the being half god that confused him, he felt that he had excepted that fact long ago but a camp for halfbloods, demigods, the word popped in his head, he recognized the fraze. He was sitting by a stream getting a lot of stares, but he felt like he was used to it, being stared at.
“I'm Dakota” a girls voice announced breaking his train of thought. Dakota was tall with long black hair and big green eyes she had thick red lips, a small nose and pale skin, with armor over the purple t-shirt everyone was wearing and black dress pants and a fighting knife strapped to her bicep she looked like Snow White gone bad.
“Percy “
“I know, I'm supposed to show you around the camp”. They walked past the training space and the stables, past the dining hall and the counsel room at the edge of the woods was the fauns house, satyrs he corrected mentally. When he asked why they were going into the woods she said the cabins dotted the woods. The first one was Minerva, wisdom and battle, a curly haired blond girl with gray eyes walked out as they went by, he reminded him of someone but as usual he couldn't remember who. After passing the cabins for Mars,Ceres, Janus, and some others they got to a large low building that looked like the cap on a fishing boat.
“Thats my cabin” she said proudly “Neptune”.
Chapter Two
Percy
Percy was freaked out he couldn't even remember his last name, it scared him. When he tried to remember anything he kept thinking that the necklace he was wearing was a clue. It had clay beads on it; the oldest one was black with a trident and the newest had a building on it, he thought for a moment, the Empire State Building. For some reason the name gave him a sense of loss. What the giant brown wolf said didn't help, it wasn't the being half god that confused him, he felt that he had excepted that fact long ago but a camp for halfbloods, demigods, the word popped in his head, he recognized the fraze. He was sitting by a stream getting a lot of stares, but he felt like he was used to it, being stared at.
“I'm Dakota” a girls voice announced breaking his train of thought. Dakota was tall with long black hair and big green eyes she had thick red lips, a small nose and pale skin, with armor over the purple t-shirt everyone was wearing and black dress pants and a fighting knife strapped to her bicep she looked like Snow White gone bad.
“Percy “
“I know, I'm supposed to show you around the camp”. They walked past the training space and the stables, past the dining hall and the counsel room at the edge of the woods was the fauns house, satyrs he corrected mentally. When he asked why they were going into the woods she said the cabins dotted the woods. The first one was Minerva, wisdom and battle, a curly haired blond girl with gray eyes walked out as they went by, he reminded him of someone but as usual he couldn't remember who. After passing the cabins for Mars,Ceres, Janus, and some others they got to a large low building that looked like the cap on a fishing boat.
“Thats my cabin” she said proudly “Neptune”.