द हीरोस ऑफ ओलिंपस 'The Son of Neptune'

Groversbro posted on Jul 01, 2011 at 06:40AM
Title: The Son of Neptune
Rating: YA
Type: Adventure, friendship, hopefully humor, maybe a touch of romance

Characters:Percy, Bobby, Reyna, Hazel, Dakota, Gwen.

OC:Roman Camp and some of Camp Half-Blood

Synopsis:The Giants are awaking and Percy Jackson goes missing. Camp Half-Blood is making a boat and Annabeth's worried sick. Percy turns up in a whole new world and he can't remember a thing.

Disclaimer: The story base, character and settings base was created by Rick Riordan, who owns the Percy Jackson and the Olympians, and Heroes of Olympus rights.
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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
1
Percy
When I woke up I couldn’t remember a thing. What’s my name I thought but I couldn’t remember that either. All I got was a sharp pain behind my eyes. Then I looked around I was in a dark room no a prison. I sat up.
“Who are you,” someone asked “and why are you here?”I looked through the bars and I saw a girl and a boy with armor and swords.
“I don’t know I can’t remember anything “I replied “why am I here? Who are you?” They walked towards me in perfect sync. The girl drew her sword and pointed it at my chest.
“Where’s Jason? Why are you here? Are you a spy?”She yelled.
“Rey calm down he can’t remember anything remember.” The guy whispered sensibly.
“Bobby, what if he,” The girl apparently Rey said he like I was some sort of gross science experiment” had something to do with J-Jason’s disappearance.”
“I’ve thought of that now let’s take him to Lupa.”Bobby said. Bobby unlocked the door and escorted me up a flight of stairs. When he opened the door the sunlight blinded me.
“Who’s Lupa” I asked.
“She is the camp counselor and the goddess of the moon.” Bobby replied.
As we walked nobody said a thing it was awkward with the silence. But it gave me time to think. Where are we, who am I, why can’t I remember anything, and who’s Jason I wondered. I wasn’t paying attention and ran into Rey.”Watch out will you… wait what’s your name?” Rey growled
“I c-can’t remember.”I replied.
“All right were here no don’t show emotion or she will kill you and by the way I am Bobby Sumner, Praetor of legion 1, Son of Minerva. Rey tell him who you are.”Bobby declared.
“Athena” I blurted out.
“No the Greek gods are dead, faded, gone.”He replied.
“No they aren’t” I replied.
“Ok whatever but I am Reyna Schwartz, Praetor of legion 2, Daughter of Neptune.”Reyna said. ”Who is your god parent”
“I can’t remember” I said again. ”Poseidon” I said and I had this gut feeling that was a lead.
“Is that you parent? Remember no emotion or she will kill you.”Bobby said again.
“I can’t remember” I said lazily.
“Wow you can't remember stuff” Reyna said with fake amazement.
“Ha-ha very funny” I said sarcastically. We walked into a big marble House with marble columns and torches.
“Reyna is this the kid from the creek?”A voice said but I couldn’t see the person it was too dark. Then I saw a wolf but not anybody that could have talked to us.
“Yes he can’t remember anything” She said addressing the wolf.
“Reyna get Dakota and have her tell everyone that capture the flag is tonight.”The wolf said while turning into a human.
“Yes Ma’am” Reyna said saluting.
“Now Bobby who is this”
“He can’t remember his name and had this on him” Bobby replied patting his pockets. I felt mine and pulled out a pen and a crumpled paper. ”How did you get that pen away from me” Bobby asked. He took the pen and tried to take the paper but I didn’t let him.
“I didn’t even know about it until now” I said. I opened the paper and found it was a not that said ‘The lake 12:00’ with a fancy A as a signature.

Sorry if its bad.
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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ajatashatru said…
it is good. build on it dude.it will develop into a great story.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
big smile
Thank you
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना pink-bookworm said…
This is really good.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
big smile
thank you too
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
Its great when will you post?
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
big smile
umm ... idk i have a lot of time but at the most 2 weeks and i am glad you like it
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना NykM said…
its good, when ya postin?
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
:) its really good I.can wait two weeks:D
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
2
Naming
Percy
“You are a demigod which means that you are part human and part-“
“God” I said cutting of Lupa which I regretted immediately.
“Yes we will test you tomorrow Bobby give him the tour put him in Mercury’s Cabin” Lupa said looking sternly at me.
“Yes Ma’am’ Bobby and Reyna said at the same time.
“Let’s go” Bobby said to me “What should we call you?”
“Umm …. I don’t know any suggestions?”I replied.
“Hmmm Conner”
“No”
“John”
“Sure I guess”
“Ok John lets go.”He said putting emphasis on John. “Well here are the 13 main cabins.”
“Wait 13 there’s only twelve right Zeus, Poseidon, Hades, Hera –“I was cut off.
“No Its Jupiter, Neptune, Pluto, Juno” Bobby said a little annoyed.
“No its not”
“Whatever”
“Ok can I have my pen back?” I asked.
“Sure“He said handing me my pen.
I took the pen and said ”What’s that”
“The sword fighting arena now let’s goes to cabin 11”Bobby said. We walked towards the cabins and someone walked up and hit Bobby in the arm. He had a care free smile and dark blond hair.
“So this is creek kid” He said “I am Dakota, praetor of legion 2, Son of Mercury.”
“He is ‘John’ for now and Capture the flag is tonight” Bobby said excitedly.
“Yes” Dakota said loudly.
“I need you to bring him to cabin 11” Bobby said passing him a note.
“Ok” He replied looking at the note.

sorry its short.
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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
smile
3
Fight
Dakota
“I need you to bring him to cabin 11” Bobby said passing me a note.
“Ok” I replied looking at the note. We walked away and I said. “We have Neptune, Minerva, Apollo, and us.”
“Will we win and what’s Cabin eleven?”John asked.
“Cabin eleven is Mercury’s cabin and yes I think we will.”I said still thinking how it would be better if I sword fought John to get a feel for his skills. ”let’s go to the arena”
“Ok” he said as we walked to the arena he pulled out a note and looked at it with a lot of concentration.
“What’s that?”
“One of my two possessions” He shrugged.
“What does it say” I said curiously.
“It says ‘the lake 12:00’ with a fancy A as a signature”
“Looks like someone has a girlfriend or you’re a secret spy. I’ll go with spy its more logical and you’re not even smart enough to drown let alone have a SMART girlfriend that could pull this off.”I said pointing at the A.”Well were here you have a weapon”
“I think so” He said pulling out a pen.
“What are you gonna do write me to d-“I was cut off as he pulled of the cap and it grew into a wicked Celestial Bronze three foot long sword.”I want one … wait is that bronze?”
“I think so now let’s fight.”I pulled out my cerates and pilum. I thought He has speed but I have defense. Okay I will fight and see if I need to change tactics.”Let’s go”
I ran at him and thrusted a few feet away. He used his sword and cut my spear in half. I pulled out my sword and dropped my shield. He then took offence and I swear he was better than Jason and Reyna put together.
“Okay I give just stop” He stopped immediately after I said this. “Dude I’m so glad you’re on my team”
“That’s good so I don’t have to kill you tonight.”
“You are gonna be attacked by a lot of people tonight.”
“Now let’s go to cabin 11”As we walked John asked me “do you have a lake here?”
“Yes. But that person won’t be there”
“How do you know?”
“The walls and magic boarders” As we entered the cabin I said “this is John that is not his real name but we shall call him this and treat him normally”
I heard shouts like ‘Is he the Creek kid’ ‘Is he determined’
“Okay, okay, He is the creek kid and Undetermined But he is still a cabin mate.”I said annoyed and they all said welcome well sort of.
One kid was pick pocketing and as he walked by I stole all his stolen cash. “Shhh”
We walked towards a bunk and I said “Well here you are”
“Umm thanks. When is super” As he said that a horn went off.
“Right now“I said. “Line up” I yelled. Everyone in the cabin got in line according to years but I told John to come with me.
“We got our food and we gave half our serving to the gods. John went up to Vesta and talked to her. He got some weird looks because nobody ever did that. As we ate everything was normal Lupa finally said we would start capture the flag.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ajatashatru said…
Percy better catch hearts not just flags.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
Awsome chapie I wonder wat percy&vesta talk about (:
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना green-art-ac-pj said…
Its good!! Good job!! Keep writing...
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
wink
Thanks and ITS JOHN not percy wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
I wonder what JOHN And vesta talk about.:P hahaaa can't wait til capture.the.flag!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
Sorry for the wait had writers block but thank you all for reading my story and the nice comments
@Ahotsummerday 12-You will have to wait and see

4
Capture the Flag
Dakota
As we got ready I was wondering what Bobby would put John on.”All right Apollo you stand guard but John and Dakota guard the left flank while Max brings Minerva’s cabin to the left. I will stay and guard and on my queue Mercury go right, Reyna down the middle k break.”We all walked away and John asked why we were on the left but no one else was.
“Cause the Mars cabin hates you and I am a good fighter.”
“And they hate me why”
I shrugged “They didn’t get to torture you”
“What and I mean I’m grateful but why not”
“Lupa and don’t know why but get ready” As I said that the horn went off and the fight began. I heard screams and sword clangs and naturally we got targeted. The entire Mars cabin charged us and John did the stupidest thing ever. He charged yelling ‘For Olympus’ I watched as he owned the battlefield. I mean he jumped up and came down destroying one’s shield. He was unstoppable. He was just a blur of bronze and all their swords ended up on the ground in 3 minutes. When he was done we bound them and I looked at John and he didn’t dodge all the weapons his shirt was torn in many places and I got my first look at his shirt that said ‘Camp Half-Blood’.
“What’s camp half blood?”I asked.
“I don’t know but it’s amazing that they missed the whole time”
“They didn’t, look down” I said as he looked at his shirt and was surprised.
“How in the Hades”
“It’s Pluto”
“OK how in the Pluto”
“I don’t know but we won” I confirmed pointing at the two flags on our side. ”Let’s head back to the cabin you have your test tomorrow”
“Ok but between 12:00 and 1:00 I will be at the lake” And on that note we went to the cabin and slept or at least I did. John looked like he had a few thousand nightmares you know normal demigod stuff.
“Let’s find you a sword” I said
“But I already have one” he replied.
“But its Celestial bronze and that’s not right” I said. We walked over to Bobby, Hazel, Gwen, and Reyna. “He needs a weapon”
“This is the new kid. I’m Hazel Lee, Daughter of Apollo, Opito of legion 3, Head Archer.”
“I’m Gwen Lucid, Daughter of Hephaestus, Head Automatons maker.”
“Well where’s Jason” Reyna said I saw she had red eyes from crying.
“I don’t know but hello to you too” John replied.
“He needs a weapon so to the Cave?”I asked.
“Ya, let’s go” Bobby responded. As we started walking Bobby started talking to John and I heard snatches like ‘tam Lupa and John’ so I thought about Tam and came up to Mt. Tam.
“NO IT DIDN’T” Bobby yelled. I was surprised because Bobby never yelled.
“Bobby calm down anyways we’re here” Hazel said startled “John, pick a weapon” John walked in looking at swords and stopped at the end in front of a sword put there by a god I could tell because few have been able to pull a sword out of the floor and those few were Big Three kids.
“Bobby what did he say to you” I whispered.
“He said that Mt. Tam just fell and demigods defended Olympus and He destroyed Kronos.”He said a little angry still.
“Well he is wrong and –“I was cut off by two loud noises first a sword being released second a voice said ‘Percy Jackson’.
“What was that” John said.
“A god. We need to see Lupa now.”Reyna said irritated that he was obviously a son of Neptune because that was Neptune’s voice. “Time to go and Percy I am gonna kill you harder now”
“Sounds good” Percy said sarcastically. As we walked out of the cave Lupa stopped us and started to talk to us.
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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
hmmm
So whose point of view next and should i do a chap on Camp
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
Awsome chapter! Its cool take your time writers block happens(; I think Jason Pov maybe I like anabeth pov but she'll be all sad about missing percySo...maybe PIPER Or leo And John found his namee! Percy rember Kronos O.o creepy lol Hope you post.soon! Your an awsome writer
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
hmmm
thank you and should i have Reyna as the last point of view
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
Sorry for the short chap but i think we need to know what Camp is like now
5
Hurry
Leo
“Hurry” Annabeth said again. I was starting to get annoyed this was only my 2 break from the build and I needed sleep. You see Annabeth had this great idea to use little ear plug things were we could talk to each other but the first time we all got annoyed and took out our ear plugs. So Annabeth super glued them in our ear it hurt a lot.
“Leo Anna says your breaks up” Piper said poking me in the ribs. “Oh and here is this” she handed me an energy drink.
“Ohh nummy” I said sarcastically.
“I know right” And with that we started walking to the bunker.
“Has Annabeth slept yet?”
“Nope Nico is trying to con-“She was cut off by Nico running away with Annabeth right behind him.
“Well we better start working”
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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
Great chapter(; Reyna Pov for the ending of the book? IF SO YESSS! Post soon
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
this is to Ahotsummerday12 for commenting every post
6
I Guess I’m Surrounded by Stupid People
Reyna
“Well Percy Jackson, Son of Neptune are you ready to fight.”Lupa asked.
“Yes Lupa I will beat them all”
“Pups get everyone to the arena Percy stay here we must talk”
As we walked away I was wondering if I was Neptune’s favorite daughter because this was not very nice he could have killed Jason or he could be anything. ”Uhg why is he my brother don’t say it Bobby”
“I will He is your half brother not full brother” Dakota said.
“Shut up Dakota” Hazel said.
“It sucks we all have to fight him” Gwen stated.
“Ya it does” Dakota agreed Hazel and Bobby nodded in agreement.
“No it doesn’t I am gonna kill him” I growled.
“Ok Captain Sunshine. Who is gonna blow the conch horn?”Dakota said. “I vote Hazel”
“What why me” We was glared at her “Fine.” She blew the horn. “Losers” she mumbled so no one but me heard.
“What” I said.
“What”
“You know” She blushed.
“Well we should go to the arena” Bobby said.
As we walked to the arena Bobby and I started fighting “Remember that time when I blew up the Mc Donalds in Chicago and you caught fire?”
“Oh you mean the time when they only gave you 1 pickle when you asked for two and then the pipes ‘mysteriously’ explode.”
“Ya wasn’t that uber fun”
“Yes I just love being set on fire by the microwave then being put out by burning hot grease and French Fries”
“It sounds negative when you say it like that” We walked into the arena and took our seats.
“Ashley is first then Timmy” Hazel said worried.
“Don’t worry he probably has never fought before” I stated. I looked at Dakota and we had a silent agreement. He was good like really good. Then someone screamed we all looked around.
People started murmuring “Who was that” “What was that” “Look Lupa is carrying the new camper” “What”
Bobby stood up “Silence” then he sat down.
“Nice” Dakota grinned gods boys are stupid.
Then Percy walked into the arena and a lot of girls started talking about how ‘cute or hot or handsome’ he was. Gods girls are stupid too. But his shirt was torn reveling his abs.
"Let the fight begin"Lupa yelled
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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
sad
is it bad cause no ones commenting
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना pjfan1 said…
big smile
It's AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
big smile
thank yous
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
big smile
What of coruse Not it was. WONDERFUL CHAPPTER! But sorry I didn't commented they cut the internet for.like 4days(: but I'm back and that was an awomee chappy!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना green-art-ac-pj said…
big smile
It awesome!!! Post soon!! Percy has to fight everyone? I'm still kinda confised
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
smile
No percy has to fight The Preators and there seconds
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना green-art-ac-pj said…
Oh!!!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
hmmm
Should percy get a quest and whos point of veiw next?
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
Yesss!(: Maybe Reynaa?
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
ok reyna after a percy
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
COOL! I'll be waiting:D
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
smirk
thank you all
7
I make a dangerous bet.
Percy
“You are a son of Poseidon, yes”
“Yes Lupa”
“Not Neptune”
“No”
“This is dangerous you just spoke to me in Greek fluently. You need to suppress all feelings about Greek terms and you must not speak Greek”
“I-I did”
“Do you understand me?”
“Yes”
“Ok but now I must test something” She scratched me in the chest. I screamed cause I was gonna die but I didn’t feel a thing. ”As I feared get on my back” I hopped onto her back then she took off galloping or trotting or … you get what I mean. “Well do you have a weapon?”
“Yes, Lupa but I won’t use it until Legion Two”
“Oh, really” She curled her lip into a wolfish grin “How about a bet. You win I give you no work for a week, I win you train harder than anybody else”
“Deal Lupa you’ll find me on the beach chillin with a few dolphins” I said cockily.
“Ok were here get off and make it good” I jumped off and walked up to the door it opened automatically. I walked in with a stupid grin on my face.
“Let the fight begin” Lupa yelled “First Ashley Cole, Opito of Legion 5, Daughter of Venus.” Ashley walked in and ran at me with a spear. I ran at her and pushed her spear down then flipped her up using her spear as a lever. She was unconscious and Percy ran up to check on her.
“Percy has won, Medics” two medics took her off the field. Lupa yelled “Now Tim Drake, Praetor of Legion 5, Son of Mithras” Tim ran in with a gladius and a shield.
“Cool you’re Robin” I asked
“What” Tim said confused. Then he ran at me and tried to behead me.
“Tim Drake from batman the animated series” I said slowly “and it’s not nice to try to kill someone when they’re having a conversation with you”
“Shut up”
“No. So how’s Bats these days” I said jokingly.
“SHUT. UP.”He yelled. I was about to say something smart like no you when he sliced my jugular but I didn’t feel it.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
laugh
Hahaa Percy x] Post Soon!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना green-art-ac-pj said…
big smile
ThT waz gunny and awesome'nn good job!!! Post soon!!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ajatashatru said…
now he better win the bet or he will be......
great work. post soon.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…


8
Why Won’t You Die
Reyna
Percy was sliced in the jugular. Yes he is dead. No he is alive and winning he just punched him in the gut then knocked him out. “Percy wins next –“Percy interrupted
“Lupa can I face the next two at once you know I need to get to the beach I hear a smoothie calling me” He said smiling. What is wrong with him?
“Sure but I hear a few extra chores calling you” Lupa said glaring. “So now it is Jake and Joke Jinx, Sons of Mercury, Praetors of Legion 4.” Oh no they were goofy enough but together they would fall over laughing at a prank they pulled.
“Plan Delta Omega” Joke or Jake yelled running out of the tunnel.
“K O or A”
“O”
“What” Percy said as they started running around him. As they ran Percy punched one and the other went behind Percy and put a Bulls eye on his back. The bulls eye was on the small of his back. Percy knocked out the other one and pulled off the target.
“Now do you want to face two at once again” Lupa said smiling.
“No” He sounded really scared.
“Ok then now it’s Hazel Lee, Daughter of Apollo, Opito of legion 3, Head Archer” Hazel got up and jumped into the arena even though were 5 feet in the air but she has amazing agility and landed like a cat then pulled out her bow. She shot at Percy while he dodged then ran at her. With expert aim she tripped him with an arrow. Then shot his shirt to the ground.
“Go Hazel” I yelled then while she was looking at me Percy ripped his shirt off and twisted hazels arm breaking it then knocked her out. He kneeled and checked on her.
“Medics” Lupa said and they came and Percy picked up hazel Bridal style and put her on the stretcher. “Now Max Wiz, Praetor of legion 3, Son of Minerva” He walked out and threw a knife witch Percy deflected with ease. Lupa whispered behind me “Reyna I need you to go as hard as you can on him I want you to break him do you understand”
“Yes Lupa” I replied. I wasn’t very happy about this you see because Lupa hates Children of Neptune because we are too unpredictable and don’t respect authority like our Father. She tried to send me on a suicide mission last year but because of Neptune I lived. She wanted me to scout Mt Tam by myself.
I zoned out of the fight thinking and when I looked Max was being forced to surrender. He did after his arm was broken. “Lupa how many more, I need to get to that smoothie” Percy said cockily.
“Three and you can fight them all at once. Reyna, Bobby, and Dakota go!” She yelled. He was so gonna lose.
“Yes total own time” Dakota said. He’s my friend why Jupiter why. Thunder rumbled in the sky. We walked into the arena Bobby with his gladius, Ceaser, I called it French fry because it looked like a french fry with a handle. Dakota with his spear and shield. And me with my miniature trident. I slapped it with my hand and it grew into a gold sword.
“Do you even have a weapon” Bobby asked.
“Yes but I made a bet with someone” Percy replied. “Now let’s fight” He ran at us and immediately knocked out Dakota with the butt of the sword he pulled out of his scabbard. I slashed his arm bobby slashed his neck but all Percy did was stand there like in a trance. The he yelled “Get away from her Luke” He went all out on us me and Bobby went to a corner to fight him and he came at us pulling a pen out of his pocket then he uncapped it and ran at us he swung at me so fast I couldn’t block it then for some reason he got into the way of his sword and took it to the chest it bounced off and he fell down then got up back to normal and waited for us to attack “What are you waiting for” He asked. Bobby attacked and Percy knocked him out then all I remember was that I was battling for my life then darkness.
ok percy isn't gonna act like he does every time he was just in the heat of battle
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना green-art-ac-pj said…
smile
That waz good but I'm jus confused
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
hmmm
about what
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
smile
AWSOME CHAPPY! Hahaa percy soo cockyyxD
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
whos point of veiw next?
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना green-art-ac-pj said…
Um...dunno...but I'm jus saying it's a confusing chapter
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Groversbro said…
big smile
ok whos point of veiw next
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना ahotsummerday12 said…
smile
Dakota?(:
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना unknownquestion said…
That AWESOME please post soon
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Safree said…
cake
booby point of view next and it was really awesome. please post soon.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना dezzypoo said…
laugh
booby hahahhahhaha do u mean bobby lol
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Safree said…
blush
ahhh i messed up it was suppossed to be bobby that's embrassing *blush* *sigh*