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School Project! I have to make a Dystopian Movie, and this is my plot. Please tell me how good it is.

Plot:

The world now has half human, half animal beings. Laboratories have taken these beings to a place known as Area 18. Now, an outside half wolf, half human named Nick Wolfe must save the mutants.

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prussiaducky said:

Haha XD that's cute

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thanks

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welcome ^^

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:)

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Faithgurl said:

This reminds me a lot of Dewsparkle's RP--you might want to change it a little bit. But over all sounds good.

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thanks :)

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HeitsiTsegin said:

Often, dystopian फिल्में involve government. I would suggest trying to find a way to tie in a corrupt totalitarian government in with this, like have the government doing this in order to create super soldiers to help in a war that they are waging to take land from a neighboring democratic country.

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sure!

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delusional said:

Don't think I don't know what आप doing! >:)

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eh?

BlondLionEzel posted एक साल से अधिक पुराना

Well, I don't know if I should say it out loud, I might pset you. But just so आप have an idea of what I'm talking about......I know this is about Maximum Ride.......I'll say the rest out loud if आप want me to.....

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Shadowmarioking said:

the plot is flat and not interesting
as stated beforehand, dystopian फिल्में are set around the government restricting the rights या oppressing the masses in a certain manner. dystopian फिल्में can also revolve around there being no government; an anarchy if आप will.
the idea of the plot is thoroughly flawed since it fails to provide necessary detail. "half human half animal" can be replaced w/ "mutants" या "genetically altered beings". the सवाल as to "why" all of this is happening fails to be addressed, और importantly why nick has to save the mutants. who is he saving them from, anyway?

आप seriously need to address the faults in your संपूर्ण, कुल मिलाकर idea if आप want to get anywhere with it. everything must be accounted for या the script goes nowhere

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