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Hey! I wrote a beginning of a song.. I didn't like it that much.. so do u think I should continue it?

it's about a break up

(More Than This)
After all that we've been through
Don't आप let go on me now
I don't want any और tears
Don't आप bring me down


Chorus:
I swear I'd give आप और that this
If आप can stay like this
I swear I'd प्यार आप और than this
Anything आप wish
If I knew that you'd let go, oh
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
It's shitty. and kinda of,bland.

It's really flat,it needs depth to it.

It honestly up to you.
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Exactly
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brandonaz said:
nahhh it's too boring and unoriginal tbh but if आप want to be a pop तारा, स्टार it's no worse than everything else on the radio
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That's what I thought of :/
smsooom posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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So scrap it.
brandonaz posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना
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ok :)
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@brandon, that's what I thought XD
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Solas said:
I don't want to sound mean, but I think there are too many platitudes - stringing cliches together isn't good song writing.

Something else I'm wondering is: why did आप choose to write about a break up?

I've never written a song before, but if I were to give आप some सलाह then it would be to come up with an original subject. Everybody writes about break ups - be unique! I'm sure you've had plenty of meaningful life experiences that are far और interesting. :)

Hope this helps a little.
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It did :) Thnx .. :D and I don't know actually why I chose this :P
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I didn't think so. That's probably what the problem was. Not to sound cheesy, but you'll probably find it easier to write about something आप really believe in. Good luck with your song! :)
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