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So I wrote this song for my girlfriend and I'll give it to her on our 2 months anniversary.. so please tell me what आप think of it

Our Love

आप have a smile that takes me to another world
It leaves me speechless, without saying a word
आप have flawless eyes, they're like a gift from Lord

I can't live without you
Cuz you're my heartbeat
If आप wanna set अगला to me
There's a wide open seat
If आप wanna take it
Just come and make it
ALRIGHT

(Chorus):
This is our प्यार at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably आप don't know that आप mean
The whole world to me

and if I had a तारा, स्टार for everytime आप made me smile
I would be holding the night sky in my hand
We'll just forget our tears, and walk that mile

I can't sing without
Cuz you're my melody
I can't survive without you
Cuz you're my remedy
Don't leave me alone
Cuz it won't be
ALRIGHT

(Chorus):
This is our प्यार at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably आप don't know that आप mean
The whole world to me

(Bridge):
When आप need me I'll be there
Just to दिखाना how much I care
When आप cry I'll wipe your tear
When आप scream I'll fight your fears

(Chorus):
This is our प्यार at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably आप don't know that आप mean
The whole world to me
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Lucky_Kumar said:
m not an expert but i can feel ur प्यार which is enough for her...hope u had a wonderful life ;-) and i like the song
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
It's not that great, I've heard/read much better.

Is this the first song you've ever written?
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Ummm.. no but thnx for your opinion anyway
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Oh okay, e_e. you're welcome
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XxTheBeatlesxX said:
Cute. But last time I checked, anniversaries are once a year...I never understood why people think it's an anniversary if they've only been going out for a महीना या two.
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Thnx :)
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ravissa said:
man, if my boyfriend wrote me a song like that, I would put a ring at his finger and freakin किस him.

AWESOME SONG, I think ur girlfriend will like it, though I do think it is a bit too long, but ur girlfriend will totally प्यार it anyway

btw an anniversary is one full year, but I guess two months r fine too :-D
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 man, if my boyfriend wrote me a song like that, I would put a ring at his finger and freakin किस him. AWESOME SONG, I think ur girlfriend will like it, though I do think it is a bit too long, but ur girlfriend will totally प्यार it anyway btw an anniversary is one full year, but I guess two months r fine too :-D
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Ok O.o thnx anyway
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i'm behind ravissa,and sincerely speaking a proud of u, प्यार never fade u re an amazing songwritter and i believe that some दिन u would get an award as one of the best, keep it up buddy i'm bet she would be over-filled with joy when she hear this song.
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vegeta007 said:
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;)
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Bluekait said:
*sniff, sniff* That was beautiful, man. You're are a amazing songwriter ever.
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 *sniff, sniff* That was beautiful, man. You're are a amazing songwriter ever.
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लोल Thank you!! :D
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You're welcome!! ;)
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no, "you're are a amazing songwriter ever?" आप don't are, आप need to use an and amazing ever?
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1dxoxo said:
I think it's AMAZING and your girlfriend would be so stupid if she ever let आप go
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stupid is as stupid does.
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