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I need help लेखन a song!

This is a song I wrote.
PLEASE help me संपादन करे it!

Dying 4 U:

When the sun rises up in the sky,
I think about you.
When everything seems alright,
I hide the fact that,
I really do want you.
Don’t think I could live without you.
Nobody knows.
And I won’t tell them.

I can shake you.
I may break you.
But you’ll never know how I feel.
I’m playing hard-to-get.
Just don’t get upset.
When it burns my दिल
to let आप go.
Gotta let आप know.
I’m dying for you.
Dying for you.

When आप try
to act
so cool.
And it doesn’t work out.
I, I think it’s cute.
But आप could never know.
Oh, oh, oh.
When आप flip your hair
out of your eyes.
But it just gets messed up.
I, I think it’s charming.
But आप can’t ever figure out.
No, no, no.

I can shake you.
I may break you.
But you’ll never know how I feel.
I’m playing hard-to-get.
Just don’t get upset.
When it burns my दिल
to let आप go.
Gotta let आप know.
I’m dying for you.
Dying for you.

Can’t take it anymore.
I want आप द्वारा my side.
When I’m alone at night.
Hold my hand.
Tell me that आप प्यार me.
Need you, want you.
Can’t live another दिन without you.

I can shake you.
I may break you.
But you’ll never know how I feel.
I’m playing hard-to-get.
Just don’t get upset.
When it burns my दिल
to let आप go.
Gotta let आप know.
I’m dying for you.
Dying for you.

Dying, hurting, when you’re deserting.
Helpless, needless.
Want आप so bad.
Dying for you.
Dying for you.


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PftFan99 said:
It seems fine to me.. it doesn't need any editing. It is perfect the way it is.

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Wow.Encouragement.Best and Only.
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cloudstrifefan said:
Beautiful.Post a video of आप गाना it on YouTube and maybe you'll be discovered and get money.
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i agree with him!!!!
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I'm a girl...
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LadyL68 said:
Beautiful:) don't change a bit of it...
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Amberla said:
Very emotional song... I like it :) Especially the lines:

I can shake you
I may break you

Hahahha xD लोल can't stop laughting, sorry!
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XxEmolovexX said:
awesomeo


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dodo_isgreetfan said:
its aswam
u can add this if u want
if u hold me i will sheak , if u drop me i will break ,if u dont call i will worry ,and if u need me i will hurry ,if u hurt me i will cry , but if u leave me i will die
hope आई यू like it
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