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so i was going thru my notebook and i found this single paragraph :

I woke up early in the morning and put on my coat. I walked outside and put my हुड, डाकू up. I began to walk the white snow crunching beneath my feet. I was soon walking through the forest, suddenly a mist came out of nowhere. I could only see a few paces in front of me. The अगला thing i new there was a bag over my head and i was being carried somewhere.
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r-pattz said:
On a scale of one to ten... three.

Not lower because at least your grammar doesn't suck.

But it was boring as hell. Come on, where are your descriptive words and interesting verbs? Does the word 'syntax' mean anything to you?

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या a thesaurus, that could help too.
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chattycandy said:
well its... intresting and at least the part at the end was...interesting kinda. the words should be better.it should be और captavateing.
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i plan to make it exciting later on i guess...
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