Who will read ALL of my story??

It's called The Beginning of the End. I know some of आप have already read the first part, but I'm gonna post the सेकंड part in a sec. And I know some of आप will have no idea who the main charactor is. If this is the case, आप can find "Things about Dib" in a मंच post on my fanclub. My story will be पोस्टेड on the बिना सोचे समझे club (here) and on my fanclub. Sorry if I seem nagging about my fanclub. Here's a link to the first part...
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