Do I still need work on my stories?

Hinata90 posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना

MrsTemariNara posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना

i don't get it. what does u might want to try to pay और attention on details and inner monologue too. try to describe what characters are doing as they talk. And what does that mean?

she wanted to say :be और specific but like ur stories anyway :D

jamahl17 posted एक साल  से अधिक पुराना