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Shit [SH it] vulgar slang
1 Expel feces from the body 2 past and past part 3 accidently
4 Spike's Pain Fanfic
This fanfic is really bad. I can't even understand what's going on. Are the characters ponies या humans. They keep the whole hoof thing, yet it also keeps mentioning human anatomy. What are they, some half horse half human abomination या something? Also, this fanfic wastes no time at all with दिखा रहा है us the plot. They even ignore how the fuck any of this happened. Like Celestia becoming Spike's son...... Okay, is there something I missed in the show, because I never remember Celestia being Spike's mother. And... SOMEHOW, that makes Twilight his sister. WHAT?! HOW?! They were never biologically related to begin with, and being Celestia's mother, that doesn't even change that. And, if that's not bad enough, that is only the first five paragraphs of the fanfic. We've still got a whole five chapters to go.
Anyway, Twilight and Rarity..... SOMEHOW, are now in a relationship. This makes Spike angry, and just freaks out, and causing him to leave. Which then, SOMEHOW, makes everybody not just get mad, but hates Twilight and Rarity. And I mean, EVERYONE. Luna, Pinkie, Applejack, Rainbow, Fluttershy, Cadence, Shining Armor, even Celestia. And this goes on for the whole third chapter. I mean sweet Jesus. We only see Spike for a couple of minutes, yet this whole part lasts a good twenty minutes. This fanfic should have been called :Everybody hates Twilight and Rarity for Trying to Not Hurt Spike's Feelings and Shit".
And, also, the whole story just ends where every goes and looks for Spike and..... That's it.... That's the whole fucking story. This was supposed to be made so people could feel bad for Spike, but, the only problem is that I don't. I feel bad for myself and any other readers to have and sit through this shit.
In other words, Spike's Pain really is a pain... A total goddamn pain in the neck. But, hay, thats only my opinion. What's Your Take