Max: HOW DARE आप EVEN दिखाना YOUR FACE HERE!!!
Zack: BACK OFF MAX!!!
Star: STOP PLEASE!!!
Max: GO तारा, स्टार NOW BEFORE आप GET HURT!
Star:*tears rise in her eyes and steps back*
ZZZZ BOOM Zack shoots at max. A बादल of dust clears
Max:*a force field also clears and Max is on all hooves* really, that's the best आप got I always new आप wear WEAK
Zack: WHAT
Max: आप heard me
ZZZZZZZZZ BOOM, BOOM, BOOM
Max:*same thing as before* HA! now its my turn black swirls of dust वृत्त around him then a bright glow orbits around him standing in aw Zack stares, unlike तारा, स्टार just looking in horror for she knows what comes next
ZZZRRRZZZZZRRRRRZZZZZRRRRZZZZZRRRRZZZZRR BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a figure came out of the dust, but it wasn't max well it wasn't him anymore.
She herd a rriipp sound the it was all red(BTW this is all happening on a cliff)blood red then a blue भेड़िया came out from the red he didn't have much blood on him just on his claws, teeth, ears, and some on his tail as if he dipped it in red paint
"are आप scared?" asked the blue भेड़िया tilting his head
"I don't know should I be?" तारा, स्टार asked taking a step closer"
"IF आप COME CLOSER ILL KILL आप TOO" he yelled
"kill? w-what do आप mean kill?! WHO ARE YOU!!!"
"*dose an evil laugh* आप don't get it do आप your और stupid than Zack!!!! I KILLED ZACK OK!! oh speaking of KILL I have और to, do don't आप have a school filled with alicorns? ill stop there then of to आप parents house!!!!!"
"YOU WOULDNT DARE" she yelled
"would I?" he smirked the ran off leaving तारा, स्टार in tears she glanced to a body in blood wings and horn clear off walked in fear अगला to it the face made her jump "zack...." she looked up then flew off to her school but she was too late blood was on the walls like a horror movie with words in blood saying:
SAY द्वारा TO UR MA AND PA FOR THE LAST TIME @$% !@#$
she walked over all the bodies until she hard a help it sounded like princess twi, the school principal she ran to the sound there in a room twi was under some डेस्क तारा, स्टार used her magic to lift them off her
" thank आप तारा, स्टार know I need your help that भेड़िया is a threat I need to kill it ASAP
"WHAT NO!! we cant!"
"why not it kill dozens of colts and mares I thought आप would care"
"I do but that भेड़िया is max..
"WHAT तारा, स्टार I think आप need to lie down"
" *rolls her eyes* he used black magic the spell of night claw he's just under his control that's all"
"then why is max blue?"
"UG I DONT KNOW but we cant kill him I प्यार him even if he did kill Zack, Sara, Zoey , Ruby and other ponies but it wasn't him"
"LETS GO" yelled twi
"and save him from the spell" shouted Star

LOOK OUT 4 PART 3!!!!!