Awesome drawing :D

I tried drawing my two original characters having a moment under the sunset but i failed miserably ><" anyways, let me know what आप guys think

this is the first video i पोस्टेड on youtube, i hope आप guys could tell me what आप think of it (:

This is one of many How To vid's द्वारा Mark Crilley! He has taught me so much about how to improve my drawings :)