ऐनीमे creators Silver Angel: Occam's Razor RP

blackpanther666 posted on Feb 27, 2012 at 12:43AM
Silver Angel: Occam's Razor

Plot: In a world ruled by monarchy, clans and democracy, things are difficult and have been for a while. A new political power seeks to rule, not only Quaesar, but Telph and Zannap too. Lord-Democrat Garan is the leader of the United Future movement and has recruited one of the most powerful Enikase, Foreseer of Truth. Foreseers of Truth exist only to twist truths into lies and gain ultimate power in the changing political world, for doing so. Thus it goes that the truth is the simplest explanation.
The world itself, beside the clans on Quaesar, are highly political and most power revolves around being able to twist truths into lies. Enikase can do this extra well, and, in doing so, also spin a web of truth/untruth barrier around themselves, fooling anybody into thinking that they are lying when they aren't and vice versa.
This serves as a form of power, because in this world, everything revolves around truth and lies. These are mostly present in their original form, where the leader of the current democracy in power will tell lies to the people to make them think that things will be better, so that they gain the vote to win. These lies all make birth other lies smaller lies, which are all passed down. Once you get through the entire population, you realise that everything is basically a lie.

Setting: Korlathia, The three Isles (Quaesar, Telph and Zannap). This is a large world, consisted of three massive continents, separated by dangerous, stormy oceans and icebergs.
Quaesar is a warm continent generally, though the northern regions are much colder than southern regions. It is made up of temperate forest, large, unclimbable mountains and many long, braided rivers. Quaesar is generally inhabited by the many clans that make their home on the continent.
Telph is cold. It is the northern-most of the three continents and closest to Korlathia's Roof. Most of the continent is habitable, and the Moors have created much technolohgy to allow them to survive in the harsh condidtions.
Zannap is a mixture of the two. Though it can get very cold, it can also get very hot, as it is the southern-most of the continents, but it is also long enough to be closer to Korlathia's Roof, than Quaesar, which is smaller. Zannap has a very variable landscape, it can be flat, with small hills, mountainous regions, temperate and tropical forest, meadows, flatlands and river valleys.

These clans are particularly fierce and war-like, often having competitions between different clans/tribes. Not only that, but some of the clans are at war with each other, which has lead to an uneasy truce between other clans, for the time being. There are eight clans that are living on Quaesar, as of the start of this storyline:

Na'salan: Debatably the most fearsome of all the clans... Their warriors are known to be some of the toughest in Quaesar. Their current Clan Leader is Jiera'Na. (Clan members have their names, followed the first two letters of their clan on the end)

Tu'kalar: Also one of the tougher clans in Quaesar, but arguably, also the have some of the most intelligent and cunning warriors too. Their current Clan Leader is Solon'Tu.

Gi'ralan: These warriors have been branded cowards by the Tu'kalar and Na'salan, and are currently at war with both. Their current Clan Leader is Hordan'Gi.

Fe'hebel: A bunch of 'pacifists', that don't believe in fighting, in any form. Their current Clan Leader is Daran'Fe.

Cr'feluun: A mysterious clan, that have their own way of using link-magic. Their Shaman, Nedra'Cr, is an expert in healing and other mysterious arts. Their current Clan Leader is Tiera'Cr.

Jo'repiir: A very sadistic clan, their warriors aren't the toughest, but they sure know how to fight and they are very, very determined, especially if it involves bloodshed. Their current Clan leader is Kigan'Jo.

Wk'laffan: Decisively average in every way, none of this clan have ever distinguished themselves, however they are possibly the most civilised of the clans. Despite that, they have their source of determination and sometimes follow it. Their current Clan Leader is Niero'Wk.

Ye'Geffir: At war with the Jo'reppir. Their warriors are quite tough, but, because they have many cowardly warriors, the bravest of their warriors often do most of the work. Their current Clan Leader is Xexel'Ye.

The Foundation of Link-Magic by Articus Releum

Excerpt:

Introduction: The Basic Principles of Link-Magic and the Definition/application of Link-Magic

Link-magic is an interesting concept, one that has been studied for many years and used for many different purposes; though it is an obscure life-force, at least, in application and takes many years of training to master, even to a small degree. The most difficult piece of the puzzle, is working out how to use it and to understand the principles behind it. To date, only four principles have been discovered and used in practice.

1. Construction: This can be used to create something, at the cost of an equivalent amount of energy. Under this basic principle, anything can be created from nothing, but requires the user to sacrifice that same amount of energy, that was expended in the crafting of the item. If the user has too little energy and uses this Prinicple, they will die from loss of body energy. The second Principle of Energy applies to this: Any energy used will be given off as heat and contribute a certain amount of disorder to the atmopshere, as a small portion of that energy can never be used to 'work' again.

2. Apparition: Can force an existing item to appear, at the cost of a small amount of energy. The item cannot be summoned if it belongs to someone. Every item has an energy signature, which is the sign of ownership by the owner. If the signature is broken, that object can be forced to submit to user and forfeits any rights the previous had over the item in question. The possessor of the item/object cannot destroy it: this is a direct component of the Principle of the Conservation of Energy. Energy can neither be destroyed, nor created... Only transferred/or transformed.

3. Transfiguration: Can summon 'Golems', that are non-living creatures, that serve their 'Master', until they are destroyed or cast away by the user themselves. In order to summon these creatures, the user must sacrifice a small portion of blood, depending on the strength of the Golem. These can only be destroyed by an existing source of magic/life-force. In addition to these Golems, other creatures can also be summoned. These are known as Shades, and, when they are summoned, the user decides what creature they want it to look like. Once this has been completed, the Shade becomes a 'shade' of the creature that the user decided on. The magic works like thus: 'threads' of link-magic, a mixture of chaos and order that sustain each other, form into longer strands, which grow larger and larger, until they begin to shape themselves. When the Shaping Process begins, the Mage decides what form they want it to take and then imagine it, letting their thoughts flow into the Shaping Process. These thoughs are what finalises the Process and allows the form to become whatever form the user desires.

4. Transmutation/recontruction: This attempts to re-create something that once existed, but no longer does. This can be applied to objects, which is what it is mostly used for... However, for an abnormally strong 'Mage', this ability can re-create a creature, that looks exactly like the person that died. This is where the magic begins to become complicated. While it 'creature' may look like the deceased, it has no real 'soul' and cannot speak or remember anything from the life that the deceased lead. In order to achieve this magic, the user must be willing to sacrifice an appendage (for human transmutation), or a large amount of energy and relatively small amount of blood, in order to re-create an object.

Link-magic, being a life-force, is present in every being of energy and sustains them. If their life-force disappears, then that being will die. This applies to all 'beings', including plants, animals, trees and humans. However, link-magic also exists in a small amount in any element, or chemical, and can be used to convert into energy. Hence the life-cycle of link-magic: life-force exists in all beings, but can be converted into energy, either from existing elements/chemicals, or beings. That 'energy' can be used for link-magic, and to create other objects, or modify existing ones. When that energy is used up - it goes back into the atmosphere as heat and a portion is lost forever, still existing, but unable to be used.

Small Glossary

Enikase: A small order of powerful men and women, who have mystical powers. As of yet, no-one but the Enikase themselves can hope to understand how it is they gathered this power in the first place. They are experts at tangling nets of lies and truths, which also hold a mystical value. This has not been witnessed since the Great Age of Truths, when the world of Korlathia was young. It is said that just being in their presence prompts even the strongest of men to insanity, through voices crying out inside their head and replicating truths and lies they don't wish to hear.

Lybringer: Personal attendants to Lord-Democrats in Telph and Zannap. They are skilled at lying and recognising lies. They have no mystical powers, but are instead revered for their proficiency to further a Lord-Democrat's cause.

Truth-teller: A rare person who cannot tell a lie, no matter what the cost. Their soul and spirit cannot withstand the simple chaotic revelation of lying and will cause them illness, even at a thought of telling a lie.

Mage: One who embraces the ways of magic and its teachings. Mages are even rarer than Enikase, but much more skilled in 'mystical arts'. There are many types of Mages, which all depend on how they ultimately choose to use the magic. Mages choose their own way in life and, once they have made their decision, they cannot revoke that decision.

Creatures/monsters: Living creatures, or organisms, that live in their chosen habitats and can potentially be very dangerous to humans.

Education

Ecology: This covers interactions between different species of animals and is very useful in helping humans to understand and augment those ways.

Biology: The study of life. Important for many reasons. Biology also covers the life-force, link-magic, and helps Mages to understand it better.

History: History of Korlathia and past wars and events.

Geography: The study of the physical land, including how the land works and how it came to be. This is closely related to geology. Geography also includes studying environments and how they work, especially the effects of human culture on the land. Geography even covers the study of man-made environments and how they work.

Sociology: The study of human interactions between one another and how this affects the man-made environments.

Healing/medicine: This covers medical treatment and hospitalisation.

Characters:

Lord-Democrat Garan (antagonist)
The Silver Angel (protagonist)
Hawk Avalon (main character)
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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
New RP! XD. I hope people are interested in this, because I think it should be pretty good.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
I'll explain a little about Truth as an aspect of power. The world itself, beside the clans on Quaesar, are highly political and most power revolves around being able to twist truths into lies. Enikase can do this extra well, and, in doing so, also spin a web of truth/untruth barrier around themselves, fooling anybody into thinking that they are lying when they aren't and vice versa.

This serves as a form of power, because in this world, everything revolves around truth and lies. These are mostly present in their original form, where the leader of the current democracy in power will tell lies to the people to make them think that things will be better, so that they gain the vote to win. These lies all make birth other lies smaller lies, which are all passed down. Once you get through the entire population, you realise that everything is basically a lie.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Hawk Avalon was a curious man. Some, in his village, would say that he couldn't lie, while others would say that his ability to tell the truth, no matter what, was a better explanation. Whatever the case was, Hawk was an interesting young man, full of hopes and dreams, wild ambition and admiration for the world outside of North Yayle.
Hawk was quite tall, even though he had only been through twenty winters, when he had seen sixteen winters, he was about six foot one and was slowly gaining more and more muscle as he grew older and older. It didn't help that the other guys his age were all much shorter and smaller, they picked on him and called him a freak, not that he cared what they thought.
Hawk walked outside, with a scowl on his face. That had been four winters ago, when he was only sixteen winters old; the other kids respected him more, though only a couple of them were actually good friends with him.
His only real friend, though, was a man slightly older than him, only by half a season, called Damian Ravdul. Damian was his best friend and the easiest person to laugh at, with and laugh and laugh even more. Damian had a curious, inviting sense of humour, one that everybody in the village would laugh at.
'Hawk, you peel. I though I'd have missed ya. Where you headin' to?' Damian asked casually, drawling slightly.
A peel was a boring person. Hawk ignored the comedic insult and stared back, the scowl exchanging for a grin. 'I was going to take a walk. Are you going to come?'
'Sure, sure. Maybe we'll see Rose while we're walking...' Damian hinted slightly. 'Yeah, yeah. I told you, I'll talk to her one of these days, but I'm not interested right now.'
Damian laughed. 'Rubbish! You know you want her, just go and talk to her.' Hawk shrugged nonchalantly then continued a quickened pace.
'Hey, wait up! I'm not as tall as you, so I can't run as fast.'
'Slowpoke!' Hawk walked even faster.
Damian sighed and stopped. Hawk stopped as well and looked back; 'alright, I'll stop.'
After the walk, Damian walked back to his small house, that he shared with his old and ailing mother.
'Hey! Mum, where are you?' Hawk yelled. She didn't answer, so he figured she was asleep and went around to her room to check on her. It seemed as though she was asleep, so Hawk went to wake her up, figuring that she hadn't eaten yet.
However, she didn't wake when he shook her. Even though it wasn't abnormal, it was still enough to set off a sense of unease in the pit of his stomach and he shook her, more roughly this time. 'Mum! Wake up!' he cried. She still didn't wake up. This time was more alarming, she had never failed to wake after the second time. Hawk checked her heartbeat and, to his utter despair, he found it didn't exist at all.
Hawk shook with grief and tears began to fall onto his dead mother's face. 'Why? Why!' he cried, over and over again, until, finally he had used up all of his tears.
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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
The being opens its eyes. Silver wings lift up high and begin to flap slowly; above the being a large, snowy mountain peeks, forbiddingly, behind the being.

-Things have changed on Korlathia... I have slept too long-


On the other side of Korlathia, things are remarkably great for Democrat Garan. Any day now, his political party will be the leading party for coalition. Any day now he'll become Lord-Democrat and Zannap will be under his law.
'Excuse me, sir. Your client is here to see you...'

Garan stands up. 'Thanks, Lukas, you can go home now, if you want. You've been working extra hard today and I really appreciate it.'

-Lies, all lies. Why does the truth always end up being a lie to him and the lies become truths-

'Thanks, sir. I'll see you tomorrow...'
Garan smiles falsely and waves his assistant out of his office. 'Yeah, no doubt of that. See you later, Lukas.'
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Scene One: The Truth Hurts (An introduction to the intricacies of lies and truths)

The truth always hurts. Not because of the obvious consequences of such devastating acts, but because of the injured feelings involved and the bitter touch of helplessness. Not even the grandest of leaders can face the ultimate truths in life, because, deep down, they are ones that will become the easiest victims of such atrocities. The ones with the most power and fame, well, they are the ones that have the furthest to fall.
This is where the truth and lies begin to intersect and influence one another. Many powerful men begin to fall under the pretense that lies are more valuable than the truth and can use them to aid them in their ambitous pursuit of power, fame, riches and more material goods that collect the dust of Ages. Truth becomes an obvious enemy to these men and distant memories. Once this has fallen into place, these men become more powerful, until eventually their disdain for the truth and aptitude for lying begins to affect their lands and people begin to embrace the lifestyle of bittersweet lies. Finally the lands begin to also fall further from the ability of Truth-telling and closer to that of chaotic Lybringers, who test the merits of life as it is and as it was, by continuing the fall into a world so corrupt that lies are the truth and the truth is always a lie.

एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Small Glossary

Enikase: A small order of powerful men and women, who have mystical powers. As of yet, no-one but the Enikase themselves can hope to understand how it is they gathered this power in the first place. They are experts at tangling nets of lies and truths, which also hold a mystical value. This has not been witnessed since the Great Age of Truths, when the world of Korlathia was young. It is said that just being in their presence prompts even the strongest of men to insanity, through voices crying out inside their head and replicating truths and lies they don't wish to hear.

Lybringer: Personal attendants to Lord-Democrats in Telph and Zannap. They are skilled at lying and recognising lies. They have no mystical powers, but are instead revered for their proficiency to further a Lord-Democrat's cause.

Truth-teller: A rare person who cannot tell a lie, no matter what the cost. Their soul and spirit cannot withstand the simple chaotic revelation of lying and will cause them illness, even at a thought of telling a lie.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना whiteflame55 said…
Felix Seren was a man of truth, bound to it inexorably by what and who he was. Perhaps that was part of the reason he oppose Lord-Democrat, a man surrounded by Lybringers, though that was only a half-truth. Felix wanted to restore truth to the world, but he also wanted power. That meant taking some liberties. He reached over to the intercom on his desk nearby.

Felix: Tedra, could you come in here please?

No response. That was well, any response from her might be a lie. Perhaps that’s why she chose to use as few words as possible with him. Tedra was different from the other Lybringers, or at least, that’s what he liked to tell himself. That was a half-truth as well – in reality, he knew as little of her as he did anyone. And they had been married for 10 years!

It was a strange balance his camp ran between the truth and the lies.

Tedra pushed open the doors to his office. His entire office was covered in glass, a symbol of his openness with the public. That much was true. He hid nothing in his past from them, much as he could have.

Being a Truth-teller was deceptive. “Truth” was no simple concept. A Truth-teller might tell a lie by believing it to be true. They might tell a hundred partial truths before telling a single full truth. Being a Truth-teller made people less suspicious of him than they would of his wife, or any normal human being for that matter. Tedra was one of the few who saw through him, and it was because of her that he refused to use that advantage regularly.

Tedra walked up to him and sat on his lap, lying up against his right shoulder. She smiled at him demurely.

Tedra: You called for me?

Felix smiled: Have you gotten a hold of the data on the Lord-Democrat yet? I have a speech in an hour, and I want to go into it knowing the truth.

Tedra pouted: And here I thought you were calling for me!

Felix tisked: Now darling, we have more pressing needs. I can attend to you later.

Tedra remained put out, and rose from her seat. She removed a packet from her coat pocket, slamming it down on the desk with a little too much vigor. In big red letters, the form read “Lybringer files.” Of course, they weren’t about Tedra, but rather two or three of the central Lybringers advising the Lord-Democrat. She stalked out of the room, throwing the door shut with a clang that set his teeth on edge.

Felix removed a sheet to begin reading. While he felt no enmity towards Lybringers a group, he couldn’t help feeling annoyed as he perused the sheet, analyzing what policies each had participated in recently. They were the reason Zannap was a nation of lies, and he was one of the few trying to save it. He wouldn’t give up, no matter how bleak the outlook.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
The Silver Angel (By Democrat Garan)

History: The Silver Angel is a myth, which has existed purely for cavalier acts and false truths. Has appeared in frequent tomes, but there has not been a witnessed sighting the Angel.

There are many fabrications to describe the Silver Angel, though no person has ever truly been certain of this information. One such description, is thus, the Angel wields a sword, one that has reported powers, though this is, again, highly uncertain. No one has seen neither the Angel or the sword.

Appearance: Anywhere from a large being with wings, to some kind of flying dragonfly creature. There are varied opinions on the originss and appearance of this Pseudo-God.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Ockanresor ('Occam's Razor')

Ability: This sword searches for, and finds, the ultimate truth, in any situation. This same rule can apply to the Silver Angel and is a heavy weight to bear, especially with such a responsibility.

Origins: This has lain dormant in the hands of the Silver Angel for quite some time. In ancient times, this sword was a bitter weapon, protecting the secrets of its origins and keeping truth as truth and lies as lies.

Appearance: A longsword, with a large, double-T bar, made from prelidium, a material notorious for being hardy. The blade is about 1.5 meters long, but very light. The blade is about as tall as a hand's width from the top of the blade to the bottom, sharpened, point, at its widest point. Also as sharp as a razor.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Until more people join, I'm taking a break on this. But, if anyone is interested, please post a character on this forum and follow how me and Whiteflame have done it. XD
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना whiteflame55 said…
I do hope more people get involved here, it's an interesting idea for an anime.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
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Yes, it would be good. I'm not bothered if it doesn't get started up for a little while, as long eventually other join and/or are interested. I am prepared to invest a fair bit of time into this, as with other RPs, as long as a few others are too.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Sinna_Hime_chan said…
Rose Harrow was as soft and kind as a kitten... while her father, [the twice-her-senior] General Harrow, now retired, was her polar opposite. Rose had the fair, angelic face and comely demeanor of a blossoming young woman. Beguiling rose-coloured hair and eyes, at five-six, she was a bonny lass. She would be twenty in only a few weeks. Optimistic and hard-working, she worked three jobs, saving all of the money she could manage, ferreting away every coin [for “something” which she told no-one]. She worked in the Central Pilot Office, with secretarial duties [usually running various papers around that needed to be signed, in the Democratic Office of Zannap's Alegirion District]. In the evenings she hurried to the sonic train, known for its high speed, jet-like propulsion, and raced off home to Quaesar's North Yale. There, she would scurry to the flower shoppe, where she'd either don an apron to trim and arrange, or stock the outside stands that housed colorful baskets of flowers for passersby’s... whilst additionally the storefront mingled in flower gift-o-grams (sometimes accompanied by costume).

Lastly, (but not least), she would often babysit and/or walk pet animals for further funds. She had a reliable clientele who needed her help, and she was happy to do so as a personal favor, as well.

Not to be underestimated, Rose took after her mother, in that she had a strength and sassiness if provoked; where she was passionate, sharp, and quick. Unfortunately she might intimidate a trifled soul.

Aloof to multiple suitors, she concentrated on her tasks, and dreamed of other things. She would be too tired or too busy to do the usual activities the people her own age participated in for fun. There were a handful of friends she could count on. She enjoyed their company, but sometimes she felt like she was not seen to exist by a certain someone.



Here, embarking upon her second job, scuttling mid-stride to take off high heels, she ran down the pristine white sidewalk toward the flower shoppe. With windswept long hair, Rose rounded the corner full tilt and swooped up an apron off a hook still in quickened motions to dance back into her heels without a breath to stop!

“Ohhh! ‘To have such energy!” Hattie Mae, the Shoppe-keeper squawked –as Rose blew by.

“No Hattie,” Rose smiled over her shoulder, “It is caffeine!” (She had chugged a cup of warm brew while she ran up the street.) Rose was still hurrying here and there to fetch pruning clippers.

“Well, whatever it is…Stop! You are making me dizzy child!” cried the gruff-voiced, but loving 60-year-old woman. Rose just beamed her sweet smile. “If only to be her age again!” Hattie mumbled, with a sigh, returning to her work.


...............Rosealyn {Rose} - only child...................
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 Rose Harrow was as soft and kind as a kitten... while her father, [the twice-her-senior] General Harr
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
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Awesome! Nice writing... XD. Arigatou!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Sinna_Hime_chan said…
Yui Lin {called Sin} wore a multi-coloured tourmaline crystal around her neck which hung just in the onset of rather buxom cleavage of someone all of five-foot-three, at the most. Agile, flexible, and fleet of foot, although voluptuous, she carried herself tall and stately in an imbued sense for one so diminutive in stature. Within the proportionate frame housed hidden emotional and physical strength while coldly retaining grace. Long blue-black hair fell like cool black silk down to a v-shaped point just below her bottom. Exotic, and mysterious…one could not pinpoint nor rule out ethnicity. Her skin was pale. Her eyes were almost dark as night. As bewitching as her features- (especially stepping out from shadow into moonlight at night), the effect was unnerving and haunting. Something about her very presence stirred the soul (for good or for ill).

Multi-talented and multi-faceted, her range varied considerably in juxtaposition. A weapons specialist, among other things, (with a fervor for antiquity), she combined her skills to be as lethal as she was lithe. She would always follow through on a mission and she did not take prisoners or believe in loose ends. It was a cold and calculated rule she followed. There was no room for error or mistakes. She would not be sloppy! Conversely, with all this terse and tainted stolidity, she was not a chameleon, in the typical sense, or even an actress. She drew from what she harbored deep within, from what was real, both grim and good, and chased her demons by storm, back into the nightmares from whence they emerged. Thus, she formed many faces not from insanity, as much as necessity. She was as much an indentured servant as she was paid proper, at least in living cost expenses. Her business was as much blood as dealing in any other number of manipulations of outcomes or securing of events and interests.

Her heart dwelled in darkness, but in captivity -because she was not without feeling, and this bane and curse she kept secret unto herself. It would torment her every waking breath if she lingered her thoughts upon her deeds. Thus she did not carry the knowledge of plans in their entirety when it concerned the convoluted objectives of those she worked for. In order to sleep at all at night, she kept her focus simple. It was not an easy task, though, when one has a naturally curious and analytical mind.


Age: UNKNOWN
[main appearence between 24-34 years of age]
but able to pass for younger, as well.
Actual name: UNKNOWN.
Actual occuptation: UNKNOWN
or whatever it is at any given time.
ENKIASE (at least in part if not whole)
True nature: UNKNOWN .......................-*Lonely, searching


Sin -
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 Yui Lin {called Sin} wore a multi-coloured tourmaline crystal around her neck which hung just in the
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
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Hey, awesome character, Sinna. I really like it! XD
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना Sinna_Hime_chan said…
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Relief! I am glad you liked. Thank you for the compliments on my writing. I have been rusty of late. (I do not know if it is appropriate to post these commentary thingies here, I am following your lead, but I guess they can always be deleted if you wanted it cleaned up for rp posts only later. I talked to White Flame, too, not long ago.)XD & I am very relieved (& thankful) you both approved of my writing!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
That's great, I'm glad you are enjoying yourself and getting back into writing... I hope I get to talk to you sooner or later. But internet has terrible lately and people have giving lots of stuff to keep me busy XD.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
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I hope more people join... I really want to RP this, but its hard with only three people in such a large, intricate and complicated world. XD
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
tongue
name: Laileb, (which spelled backwards means deceptively beautiful fallen angel, who's name is without worth)
Laileb has the deceiving appearance of a child, his callow beauty and everlasting childish charm grabs people's heart and soul
powers: Laileb has the ability to use his ukulele to utterly charm people and sometimes bring them into their doom, sort of like the pied piper, and he can also hypnotize people with his musical spell

He works for the democrat Lord Garan, he calms him and soothes his wrath with his music and tender playing(sort of like David form the bible), puts him to sleep and also does his dirty work, but then when his plying is not good enough, Laileb is beaten, not to mention verbally abused every 5 minutes, but even Laileb's awesome powers cannot surpass the kings stone which makes him immune to all magic it is called the bloodstone

Said to have the power to turn the sun blood red, and to cause thunder, lightning, rain, and tempest! Bloodstone is also used to stop bleeding and preserve health and well being. Gives the wearer clairvoyance and guards against deception. Believed to be one of the most healing and protective stones on earth. Bloodstone is *green* and may have red specks} Vibrates to the number 6.

the poor fallen angel is given barely anything to eat, until one day, the princess, who is the rightful heiress to the throne appears. Laileb is supposed to take her to Garan or kill her himself bu her beauty is too much for him to bear, not her outer beauty alone, but her inner beauty, she offers the boy a whole apple to eat and she is very sweet, and he decides that he wants to work for her instead, however, Garan is still in power, so while he secretly pretends to work for Garan he tries to get this undercover princess unto her rightful place as queen.
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 name: Laileb, (which spelled backwards means deceptively beautiful fallen angel, who's name is withou
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
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^ ^ okay, im done Liam, what do you think? :)
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
That is very good! I think this will be great. I'll write a post over the next couple of days and contact Sinna and Whiteflame. While I wouldn't mind doing this RP just us two, it would be quite hard, because it is such a large world, with so many characters. Also, we'll also choose secondary characters to work with as well, so we can get more stuff done. XD
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
hmmm
:) okay, i will be the princess (Apollyander) and then you can be your own best friend, you the andgel and me could meet up and we could like....fight against the evil ruler, who enslaves random folk and is only (democratic) towards the rich people, but sometimes....the rich folk liked to kill people in rather grusome ways for entertainment, so while the rich people were swimming in a pool of awesomeness, the poor people, were like, dying and stuff and barely getting anything.. blackpanther, do you think this is a good idea? :\
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
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oh, wait, and the princess could be rolling with us too :P
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
meh
ps. Liam, we should probably discuss together what creatures are sutable to live in each of the lands, to me it seems like Zannap is the perfect place for humans and "maybe" a few fairytale things....plus the animals could be messed up, like...not earth animals
and i was thinking Quesar is the perfect place for angels, they could live on the top of the clouds of the unclimbable moutains and only come down to gather stuff....but you have to give me your opinion too
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Yes, I think much of what you said would be good... I'll also concentrate on the political side of things, during the RP, along with Whiteflame, if he is still interested. You can worry about the Angels and such, as well as anything to do with this princess. XD.

(The creatures I will work on, because I have some ideas for what we could do on that end. XD)
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
Princess Apollyander
personality: sweet caring, kind , nurturing, loving, brave, everything a princess should be, she does have a few flaws though, and does not "always" live up to her common traits
Apollyander is very young, about 14 for the most
Apollyander has a little "problem" concerning her personality, you see, the princess is supposed to lay low, but that is nearly impossible considering she is not the not down to earth person in the whole "wide" world :)
she loves wearing her princess dresses and if she can help it, her crown. she refuses to be seen in petty peasant clothing with holes and patches and dingy marks, which can make her very easy to be spotted as the princess. She's just a little pompous and very smart and endearing, she can use force but she prefers to use her kindness to get what she wants
background: the three kingdoms used to be ruled by three kings (who happened to be brothers at the time) but they were killed out, them and all their wives and children by Garan and all his supporters. Garan promised the people a democracy where everyone will be able to have a say, and make their own opinions and such and such, and everyone loved him for a while, until the kings refused to step down form their throne and Garan killed them all along with their wives and their children, but the people loved the kings and did not want him to be in rule, although he did have some supporters, like most of the rich people, and a few men who were promised portions of his wealth, but the majority of the people were poor, but they were not part of the "democracy*
however, little did Garan know that the King of Telph had a daughter named Apollyander, who was only 7 at the time, but no one knew about her because the king of Telph-Gadreel which means (God is my helper) had her before he had married the queen and did not want anybody to know.
A servant of the king found her alive and took her away and protected her not b y force but by choice, but by the age of 14, when she realized that things in the new leadership were only getting worse, she set off to find helpers and supporters who would help her to take her rightful throne as queen, she knew she would not find many within the rich community, but in the poor folk she would find many, the servant who took care of her (Sameal) reluctantly let her go knowing it was a totally and completely stupid idea....she is sort of like a little robin-hood when you think about it you know, taking form the rich giving to the needy etc. :P
oh sorry i 4 got to say that her hair changes colour with her mood ^ ^
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 Princess Apollyander personality: sweet caring, kind , nurturing, loving, brave, everything a prince
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
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:D good idea BP i can't wait! ^ ^
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
I like your character, coriann, it is very awesome! XD
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
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^ ^ awe thx Liam!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Okay, my first idea...

A. In order to inject the idea of 'horror' into this thing, I believe we need to make the creatures fearsome, like dragons and such... Therefore, I am going to create some creatures that are similar to Final Fantasy monsters.

B. I really want to make sure that the political side is empthasized, so I will work on a policy for each government (Zannap and Telph, Quaesar has no 'government').

C. I will post a proper bios for Hawk.

D. I will post a proper bios for Garan.

E. I want to develop the idea of 'clans', the groups of people that exist on Quaesar.

F. This RP will have some particular technologies that are available to them. I will develop a scientist character, who will do so. The two majors (Zannap and Telph) will have high-technology societies and those will exist in many different forms. Quaesar will have highly-developed transport/logistics, in order to keep a certain level of contact with the rest of the world.

(I will post some of that now, the rest I will work on over the enxt few days.)
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Name: Draconiger ('Black dragon; Latin')

Bios: These creatures are huge, standing at least 7 meters high and measure 9 from nose to tail. Their wingspread is even more amazing, each wing extends about 5.5 - 6.5 meters each side and are about 2 meters from front to back. These dragons are fiercely protective of their territory, and ultimately aggressive, even when they are not within their territory.

Special traits: These dragons are very, very strong and they are also very capable fliers. Besides that, they can use their tails as a whip, which will do a lot of damage to anyone who gets in their way. They can also breathe 'black' fire, ('Kuroiki'; black breath in Japanese) that has a poison in it and will slowly damage the nerves of their victim. They are heavily armored too, enough to bend anything, but the strongest of metal weapons.

Habitat: Live in dry, warm habitats; either in forests, or amongst the mountains.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Hawk Avalon

Bios: Hawk is a young man, whose principles still need to be developed. Following the loss of his mother, Hawk had decided that he wanted to see the world and had no further reason to stay in his cosy, little village.

Appearance: Hawk is tall, but not overly so. He measures about 5 foot and 11 inches. His hair is long, shaggy and black like coal. He has blue eyes, with a touch of lavender and dark pupils. He is reasonably muscled, but not so much that it makes him look burly.

Personality: He is very light-hearted and takes everything lightly, unless it is extremely serious. However, much of that 'lightness' disappeared when his mother died and he generally takes things much more seriously now.

Skills/traits: He is great at fighting, but only hand-to-hand, as he has never used a weapon before. He is skilled at using a fighting technique, similar to 'jujitsu'.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Democrat Garan

Bios: Garan is an intense man, whose principles have likely been over-developed in many ways. While he can be seen to be nice, or considerate to others, it is merely an act to gain support from his followers and earn new ones. At his current rate, he is set to become the Lord-Democrat for Zannap, and maybe Telph too. He was once a historian and put a lot of effort into education in his younger days.

Appearance: Garan is quite old, about 55 years of age and fairly short. He measures about 5 foot and 4 inches. He is almost bald, with a sprinkling of pepper-grey hair, that is always kept shaven closely and he has a goatee. He has grey-coloured eyes, with greenish coloured pupils.

Personality: This is his main let-down. For one, he is extremely boring/tedious and has almost no sense of humour at all. Sadly enough, because of his consistent skeptic attitude, he is rarely seen as 'serious', since he tends to discount anything that could be seen as 'fictional'. Not only that, but he is also a very practiced liar and almost could be seen as a Lybringer.

Skills/traits: Highly intelligent; accomplished liar and skilled non-fictional writer.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Name: Dark Giant

Bios: An absolutely massive creature that stands at least twenty meters high. Not only is it huge/tall, but its body is massive and heavily muscled. These beasts are quiet and make almost no noise, excluding a low grunting nose every now and again. These beasts are very difficult to anger, because of their uninterest in other creatures, but, when they are, the person who angered them will be in one hell of a tight spot.

Special Traits: These creatures are very, very strong, able to break almost anything with their fists. Because of their small intelligence, they only tools they ever managed to create, were crudely-made, iron blades. They are very resistant to any kind of magic, of the relatively small amount that exists, due to their incredibly tough skin, that is even comparable to the toughness of the skin of dragons.

Habitat: These creatures only exist in very few places, for example, small parts of Zannap and Telph. They can survive in almost any type of habitat, but prefer to be near mountains.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
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I thought of a couple of other things, too. Basically, I want to set it up, so that a certain amount of magic exists in this world, but only under a very basic concept, which it MUST follow the rules of. No exceptions.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Scene Two: The Principle of Link-Magic

Link-magic is a magical life-force that sustains anything living. This life-force is made up of a combination of chaos and order, which varies for any different creature and can be very, very different between plants, animals and humans.

Link-magic follows the principle of this chaos and order interacting together, in order to create a certain balance between the two, which has a countenance over the balance of life itself. Anything considered living, whether it is an animal, tree, plant or human, this principle applies. The principle also applies to the organs of animals, plants and humans too, as well as governing chemical reactions throughout the organism's body, as well as chemical reactions anywhere else.

There are a number of other rules that apply, also:

1. Construction

2. Apparition

3. Transfiguration

4. Transmutation/reconstruction
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
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Glossary of Magic Terms

Construction: This can be used to create something, at the cost of an equivalent amount of energy. Under this basic principle, anything can be created from nothing, but requires the user to sacrifice that same amount of energy, that was expended in the crafting of the item. If the user has too little energy and uses this Prinicple, they will die from loss of body energy.

Apparition: Can force an existing item to appear, at the cost of a small amount of energy. The item cannot be summoned if it belongs to someone. Every item has an energy signature, which is the sign of ownership by the owner.

Transfiguraion: Can summon 'Golems', that are non-living creatures, that serve their 'Master', until they are destroyed or cast away by the user themselves. In order to summon these creatures, the user must sacrifice a small portion of blood, depending on the strength of the Golem. These can only be destroyed by an existing source of magic/life-force.

Transmutation/recontruction: This attempts to re-create something that once existed, but no longer does. This can be applied to objects, which is what it is mostly used for... However, for an abnormally strong 'Mage', this ability can re-create a creature, that looks exactly like the person that died. This is where the magic begins to become complicated. While it 'creature' may look like the deceased, it has no real 'soul' and cannot speak or remember anything from the life that the deceased lead. In order to achieve this magic, the user must be willing to sacrifice an appendage (for human transmutation), or a large amount of energy and relatively small amount of blood, in order to re-create an object.

Mage: One who embraces the ways of magic and its teachings. Mages are even rarer than Enikase, but much more skilled in 'mystical arts'. There are many types of Mages, which all depend on how they ultimately choose to use the magic. Mages choose their own way in life and, once they have made their decision, they cannot revoke that decision.

Creatures/monsters: Living creatures, or organisms, that live in their chosen habitats and can potentially be very dangerous to humans.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
Education

Ecology: This covers interactions between different species of animals and is very useful in helping humans to understand and augment those ways.

Biology: The study of life. Important for many reasons. Biology also covers the life-force, link-magic, and helps Mages to understand it better.

History: History of Korlathia and past wars and events.

Geography: The study of the physical land, including how the land works and how it came to be. This is closely related to geology. Geography also includes studying environments and how they work, especially the effects of human culture on the land. Geography even covers the study of man-made environments and how they work.

Sociology: The study of human interactions between one another and how this affects the man-made environments.

Healing/medicine: This covers medical treatment and hospitalisation.

एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
cool
:) kewl, uhm, i don't understand though, are we on the same page about the politics issue? i mean in mine there were kings and they were killed by lord Garan and in yours there's not even a mention of kings....plus if you want to make it more political, that's fine, um, except, i don't understand much about politics ^ ^ your creatures and stuff are cool though, so, now we gotta decide who's working together with us in our "club" or whatever, and also, you didn't mention, do your characters have powers? and where does my angel's ability to lure people in with his sound fit in to all of this?
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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
I never really was thinking of having kings, because monarchy is far too cliche and monarchies, coupled with politics, make things more complicated. You don't really have to worry about politics, I'll be doing all of that.

As to the question about our 'club', Sinna will probably write on here and possibly Whiteflame as well. I have yet to ask him, though... But, I will in the next few days.

Last, but not least, yes, Hawk will slowly develop a proficiency with 'link-magic' and will be bale to use it well, eventually. The other characters I make, probably won't, though.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
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There was once three kings that used to rule over Zannap, Quesar and Telph. The land of Zannap is a land similar to the one in the world we live in now and the king of Zannap had the apearance of a regular human king as anyone could immagine, the king of Quesar however lived in a world that was so abundant in life, that it was like a rainforest and large animals were able to live there like huge dragons and terryfying monsterous beasts that could eat a person in one gulp, so the people had to live on a gigantic floating city and everyone there had wings. The king of Quesar was clothed in an outfit like that of an arc angel and his wings were beautiful and long. The king of Telph however lived in a dried up desolate blizard of snow, abundant in polar bears and penguins and such, and he had a beautiful white robe and he was dressed in white from head to toe. The kings were good, but Garan had promised them a land of which they would have their say, a land where the kings did not have the final word on everything, a land in which they could be free, the people liked Garan, and the sweet promises that he had made to everyone and most of them wanted Garan to rule.
All of the kings were assembled in court for a meeting with Garan. Suddenly the doors of the castle burst open. Garan walked slowly in his snake like way before the kings.
"You must bow before consulting with the kings" said Zannap who was the most powerful "Well..."
Garan: "The people are getting tired of your games Zannap"
Zannap:"what are you saying?"
Garan: im saying, they're tired of taking your orders, obeying your every last word without hesitation, and what about their families? the poor are still poor Zannap, the needy are still needy while you swim in your pool of riches"
Quesar:That's it, get him out of our sight
Telph:we can't, we have to come to an agreement with him, the people are causing an uprising
Zannap: and you propose to give the people a better life?
Garan: certainly
Quesar: and what is a better life Garan?
Garan: a life in which they can make their own desisions, a life where the majority...calls the shots...and not pompus little rich boys like you. And then Garan walked over to Zannap and spit on his throne. Zannap was flabbergasted
Garan: mark my words, i will kill you, every last one of you as soon as im out of here if you refuse to step down
Zannap: take him away! the guards hoarded around Garan, spears at every last turn, they bursted out of the palace with him. But the people outside were shouting and crying "Let Garan go" "Free him" women were crying, men were getting angry, the kings had no choice.
The next day Garan had his followers kill the servants and they disguised as them and poisoned the royal banquet, all of the kings, the kings wives, servants and anyone who ate at the castle that day died. Then Garan and his men went on a killing spree throughout the entire castles of Zannap, Quesar and Telph. But the king of Telph had a daughter that he had concealed for years, who he had with a servant. One of the kings trusted servants was holding her on that very day, flaming arrows were being pelted everywhere, but the servant kept her well covered
Servant: don't worry Apollyander i will keep you safe. He escaped on a tamed polar bear with the girl
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एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
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^ ^ so what do you think Liam? are you impressed? do you have any ideas for something different?
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
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Nicely done. I have ideas for the events leading up to that revolt and I'll write a piece on it later. As for now, good job. XD
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना coriann said…
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:D yay!
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
[The Death Of Monarchy! Politics Reign Begins]

(Make a note, coriann, but I'd prefer to have just Zannap and Telph as kings - I wanted Quaesar to be a 'free' nation, headed by Clan Leaders of each 'clan'.)

The two kings sat at a long, square table, along with their sub-ordinates, that all looked fairly unhappy. Despite the encouragement of a monarchy throughout the last hundreds and hundreds of years, it was waivering quickly. Politics were becoming the latest 'trend' in this society, a mixture of lies, truth and broken promises.

Zannap: I don't like the idea of 'politics', it just seems like that Democrat, Garan, just wants to 'control' the people and have them believe things that he wants them to believe.

Telph: Yes, I agree. But, how do we stop him? The people seem to have bought his story.

Zannap: What should we do?

Telph: We must call upon the Advisors... Talan, Nort and Gren, please stand.

(The three Advisors stand)

Nort: I have an idea...

Zannap, Telph: What is it??!!

Nort: Well, we could hold an election and try and find another candidate for this 'change'. We won't be able to stop the flow towards politics, but we can find a better candidate for this 'Lord-Democrat' position, than Garan, that scheming snake.

Zannap: Great idea... Telph and I, well, we shall find a better candidate ourselves... Someone charismatic.

एक साल  से अधिक पुराना whiteflame55 said…
Opposition Candidate Felix Seren

Bios: Born in Zannap, Felix is a Truth-teller, and has been since he was born. He despises lies, and sees the world around him as the biggest one of all, built by tyrants such as Garan. His sense of justice led him to police work in his early years. His lack of physical prowess was more than made up for by a strong intellect and a mind for organization. He was promoted into the role of an envoy for the peacekeepers of Zannap to the other nations, learning a tremendous amount about how they functioned and incorporating them into his worldview. It was during this time that he met and wed Tedra, a Lybringer, in what was and is still considered a union of opposites. In truth, they share much the same ideals, though their methods to achieve them differ dramatically. It was because of her that he entered politics, and immediately pushed for a role that could do the most good. As a result, he now seeks the seat of Lord-Democrat in Zannap, hoping to bring a sense of truth – and with it, justice – to the people of a nation beleaguered by lies.

Appearance: Relatively young, Felix is 29 years old, with a head of well-kept brown hair, a clean-shaven face, and deep amethyst eyes. He’s learned how to function in authority well over his few years of leadership, though he often drops that guise in private. At just a shade under six feet, people often are forced to look up to him, whether they want to or not.

Personality: He tries to portray boundless energy in all that he does, portraying a belief in truth that few others can match for conviction. He gives fiery speeches about truth and justice not because he wants to get elected, but because they run to his very core. He is incredibly serious when it comes to issues of morality, but is known for levity in other conversations, and easily endears himself to others, even those he disagrees with. His public personality, however, is dramatically different from his private persona. He is burdened by constantly having to tell the truth, and burdened by trying to spread the truth to others. He questions whether any of his goals are reasonable or achievable, but only confides in his wife with these concerns.

Skills/traits: A Truth-teller with a tremendous amount of international experience and legal expertise, he’s a talented speech writer and giver, who easily garners respect and admiration.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना whiteflame55 said…
Tedra Seren

Bios: Born in Quaesar, Tedra is a Lybringer, and has been for a sizeable portion of her life. She was sold into it the profession, and despite being quite accomplished, remained in servitude well after finishing her learning. Life was a dismal journey composed of little more than speaking whatever lies she was told. She learned to lie dispassionately, no longer caring what harm her lies did to the world around her. It was only when she met Felix that her world took on new meaning, and he found new meaning in her. She was bought off her current “owner,” and allowed to do as she wished. She chose to accompany, and eventually marry, Felix. Her newfound freedom brought with it a strong sense of justice like her husband, though she sees little difference between justice gained through lies and one gained through truth. She seeks to balance her husband’s campaign, and to push him towards a glorious future that she feels is his right.

Appearance: Tedra is older than her husband at 35 years old. A head of sandy blonde hair that was once such a mess is now a refined set of curls, often bound up in a pony tail that goes just past her shoulder blades. Her eyes are gold flecked with green. Unlike her husband, she finds it difficult to hold to a stately manner in both speech and posture, often lapsing into overly casual manner. She tops her husband just slightly at an even six feet, though with her slouch she always appears shorter than him.

Personality: After a life of sorrow, she can always be found laughing. She views her current life as a blessing, doing everything she can to put the past behind her, but not the lessons she learned. She is not shy to use her skill as a Lybringer for her husband’s needs, though he discourages such behavior. Never afraid to speak her mind to anyone, she is often too blunt for political circles, though in others she is viewed as a breath of fresh air. Her moral views are as strong as her husband’s, though unlike him, she holds to consequentionalist views, believing that the ends always justify the means. As such, she will do anything she has to in order for her husband to achieve the position of Lord-Democrat, often without his knowledge. She acts heavily as a source of calm for her husband, telling him sweet lies when he needs them.

Skills/traits: A Lybringer with tremendous practical experience, she’s also taught herself a great deal of biology, with a bit of medicine. She is capable of growing plants in even the most inhospitable of environments, and effective at healing certain kinds of wounds.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना whiteflame55 said…
I'll have an actual post up tomorrow most likely.
एक साल  से अधिक पुराना blackpanther666 said…
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Heh, thanks for putting up the bios for your characters, Whiteflame... Much appreciated. XD. I'll be looking forward to your post, tomorrow, or whenever you get it up, then.