Hi everyone I just got this from my editor...
और will be added to this. But we will have to wait till he's done with the rest...
Anyways without further ado here's the editors edition of chapter 1!
SNOW
AN ALPHA AND OMEGA STORY
द्वारा Snow Wolf
CHAPTER I
LONE WOLF
I
It was a beautiful दिन in Jasper National Park. The sun was out and the radiance of the green घास shone in the bright morning light. A gentle cool breeze flowed through my fur, making my कोट sway from side to side. The storms had been brutal the past two days but no matter the weather, nothing was going to ruin this perfect day.
I was playing with my new friends, Jessie and Ryan. Jessie had grey फर with a white underbelly, her eyes a striking ice blue. Ryan's फर was golden, and he shared the same white underbelly as his sister, but he had strange turquoise eyes, a rare thing for a wolf.
We were playing Pin the Wolf. We chased around, trying to pin each other to the ground. As we laughed and fell about, we heard a voice coming from my newfound friend's den,
"Jessie! Ryan! It's time for your Alpha duties!" shouted their dad, Humphrey.
"Coming dad!" they barked in unison.
I looked toward them as they started to run off.
"I'll see आप guys later for the hunt, I better go tell mom and dad what I'm doing if we're going to disappear for a few hours!"
Ryan turned his head back and with a sly grin, said;
"Sure Snow, I'll meet आप at the hunting grounds before the sun starts to set. Don't forget!"
I smiled and nodded my sarcastic agreement as Ryan sprinted to catch up with his sister.
~
I got back घर and found mom and dad sitting at the mouth of the den, enjoying the sun. Rebecca greeted me warmly as I trotted up to them. Vincent stayed quiet but he was always like that.
"Hello son. Did आप have fun with Jessie and Ryan?" she asked as she pulled me in to a comforting hug. "You look like आप did!" she कहा with a caring smile forming on her muzzle.
"Of course, mom. Actually, I was going to tell आप something -"
"Let's go into the मांद, डेन and talk about it Snow. I'm pretty sure whatever it is, the whole territory doesn't need to hear it."
Rebecca got up and went inside, and Vincent followed dutifully after her. Once inside, dad turned to me.
"We'll son, what is it? Did आप get a girlfriend at last?!" he asked as he chuckled at his joke.
"DAD!" I exclaimed, giving a harsh पंच to his leg. "You know I'm not old enough for that!"
He yelped playfully, pretending I'd hurt him badly.
"Ha ha, okay son, I'm sorry. What's the big news आप have for us?"
"Nothing, I'm just going hunting with Jessie and Ryan so I won't be back for a few hours, that's all."
"That's it? I mean, that's fine son, at least you're helping feed the pack. That's all that matters. Just be careful, we don't want आप getting hurt. Remember you're only young and not as strong as the other wolves."
I noticed my dad had a worried look in his eyes. He turned to look at mom.
"I don't think going inside for that was necessary Rebecca..."
"Vincent honey, I was only concerned for Snow. Now if आप don't mind shutting your hole before I rip out your -"
"Honey, that's enough. I don't think Snow wants to hear this." he said, putting his paw over my mother's muzzle.
She pushed his paw to the ground, tapping it in annoyance as she pulled away from him, clearly miffed.
"Don't worry dad! I'll be careful. One दिन I'll be the greatest Alpha ever!" I beamed, as I moved closer to give them both a hug.
I turned and started toward the entrance to the den, but was stopped in my tracks द्वारा the appearance of three dark furred भेड़िया with demonic red eyes.
"Wh-wh-who are you? What do आप want?" I stammered, फ्रोज़न to the spot.
Dad stepped in front of me.
"Get away from my son." he growled flatly under his breath.
Mom was in front of me too now, desperation and anger in her voice.
"You heard him! Get लॉस्ट now before I rip out your throats and tear your carcasses apart!"
The biggest of the three intruders laughed, and waived his paw at the other two, motioning them to attack. They responded instantly, pouncing at my parents giving them no time to react. They spun in the air and kicked their hind legs out, landing crunching blows with enough force to trigger an earthquake at each intended target. My parents. My flesh and blood.
Terrified, I hid in the corner and squeezed my eyes tight, wincing at the sound of crunching bone.
~
Although an age seemed to pass, and I desperately wanted to keep me eyes closed, I had to look, had to see what had become of my parents. I opened one tear stained eye, only to be horrified द्वारा the state my mother and father were in. They had been beaten badly, matted blood-stained फर hanging from their bruised and battered bodies. There was still some fight left in them however.
Seemingly tired of wasting his time, the pack leader of this group of evil hounds came at me all at once and struck me with his paw, claws fully extended, ripping into my chest as I screamed in pain.
Seeing their son injured so horribly, Vincent and Rebecca both screamed and struggled to get to their feet but were knocked down yet again द्वारा the two जानवर that had attacked them so mercilessly.
"SNOW!"
"NO!"
"LEAVE HIM ALONE Y-Y-YOU MONSTERS!"
"PLEASE DON'T HURT OUR SON! HE'S DONE NOTHING TO YOU... PLEASE!"
They pleaded and they pleaded, but the भेड़िया just walked away as one of them grabbed me द्वारा the scruff of the neck.
"MOM! DAD! HELP ME!" I screamed.
The भेड़िया who was carrying me द्वारा the scruff of my neck spoke in a muffled tone.
"Say goodbye to your precious parents kid because it's the last time you're gonna see them again."
"GO TO HE-"
I tried to finish my sentence but it was cut short when the भेड़िया hit me with a very hard object which seemed like the moon had just crash landed on my head. Everything started to fade into black as my दिल rate almost slowed to a stop, and I fell headlong into the abyss of unconscious sleep.
~
{To be continued...}
और will be added to this. But we will have to wait till he's done with the rest...
Anyways without further ado here's the editors edition of chapter 1!
SNOW
AN ALPHA AND OMEGA STORY
द्वारा Snow Wolf
CHAPTER I
LONE WOLF
I
It was a beautiful दिन in Jasper National Park. The sun was out and the radiance of the green घास shone in the bright morning light. A gentle cool breeze flowed through my fur, making my कोट sway from side to side. The storms had been brutal the past two days but no matter the weather, nothing was going to ruin this perfect day.
I was playing with my new friends, Jessie and Ryan. Jessie had grey फर with a white underbelly, her eyes a striking ice blue. Ryan's फर was golden, and he shared the same white underbelly as his sister, but he had strange turquoise eyes, a rare thing for a wolf.
We were playing Pin the Wolf. We chased around, trying to pin each other to the ground. As we laughed and fell about, we heard a voice coming from my newfound friend's den,
"Jessie! Ryan! It's time for your Alpha duties!" shouted their dad, Humphrey.
"Coming dad!" they barked in unison.
I looked toward them as they started to run off.
"I'll see आप guys later for the hunt, I better go tell mom and dad what I'm doing if we're going to disappear for a few hours!"
Ryan turned his head back and with a sly grin, said;
"Sure Snow, I'll meet आप at the hunting grounds before the sun starts to set. Don't forget!"
I smiled and nodded my sarcastic agreement as Ryan sprinted to catch up with his sister.
~
I got back घर and found mom and dad sitting at the mouth of the den, enjoying the sun. Rebecca greeted me warmly as I trotted up to them. Vincent stayed quiet but he was always like that.
"Hello son. Did आप have fun with Jessie and Ryan?" she asked as she pulled me in to a comforting hug. "You look like आप did!" she कहा with a caring smile forming on her muzzle.
"Of course, mom. Actually, I was going to tell आप something -"
"Let's go into the मांद, डेन and talk about it Snow. I'm pretty sure whatever it is, the whole territory doesn't need to hear it."
Rebecca got up and went inside, and Vincent followed dutifully after her. Once inside, dad turned to me.
"We'll son, what is it? Did आप get a girlfriend at last?!" he asked as he chuckled at his joke.
"DAD!" I exclaimed, giving a harsh पंच to his leg. "You know I'm not old enough for that!"
He yelped playfully, pretending I'd hurt him badly.
"Ha ha, okay son, I'm sorry. What's the big news आप have for us?"
"Nothing, I'm just going hunting with Jessie and Ryan so I won't be back for a few hours, that's all."
"That's it? I mean, that's fine son, at least you're helping feed the pack. That's all that matters. Just be careful, we don't want आप getting hurt. Remember you're only young and not as strong as the other wolves."
I noticed my dad had a worried look in his eyes. He turned to look at mom.
"I don't think going inside for that was necessary Rebecca..."
"Vincent honey, I was only concerned for Snow. Now if आप don't mind shutting your hole before I rip out your -"
"Honey, that's enough. I don't think Snow wants to hear this." he said, putting his paw over my mother's muzzle.
She pushed his paw to the ground, tapping it in annoyance as she pulled away from him, clearly miffed.
"Don't worry dad! I'll be careful. One दिन I'll be the greatest Alpha ever!" I beamed, as I moved closer to give them both a hug.
I turned and started toward the entrance to the den, but was stopped in my tracks द्वारा the appearance of three dark furred भेड़िया with demonic red eyes.
"Wh-wh-who are you? What do आप want?" I stammered, फ्रोज़न to the spot.
Dad stepped in front of me.
"Get away from my son." he growled flatly under his breath.
Mom was in front of me too now, desperation and anger in her voice.
"You heard him! Get लॉस्ट now before I rip out your throats and tear your carcasses apart!"
The biggest of the three intruders laughed, and waived his paw at the other two, motioning them to attack. They responded instantly, pouncing at my parents giving them no time to react. They spun in the air and kicked their hind legs out, landing crunching blows with enough force to trigger an earthquake at each intended target. My parents. My flesh and blood.
Terrified, I hid in the corner and squeezed my eyes tight, wincing at the sound of crunching bone.
~
Although an age seemed to pass, and I desperately wanted to keep me eyes closed, I had to look, had to see what had become of my parents. I opened one tear stained eye, only to be horrified द्वारा the state my mother and father were in. They had been beaten badly, matted blood-stained फर hanging from their bruised and battered bodies. There was still some fight left in them however.
Seemingly tired of wasting his time, the pack leader of this group of evil hounds came at me all at once and struck me with his paw, claws fully extended, ripping into my chest as I screamed in pain.
Seeing their son injured so horribly, Vincent and Rebecca both screamed and struggled to get to their feet but were knocked down yet again द्वारा the two जानवर that had attacked them so mercilessly.
"SNOW!"
"NO!"
"LEAVE HIM ALONE Y-Y-YOU MONSTERS!"
"PLEASE DON'T HURT OUR SON! HE'S DONE NOTHING TO YOU... PLEASE!"
They pleaded and they pleaded, but the भेड़िया just walked away as one of them grabbed me द्वारा the scruff of the neck.
"MOM! DAD! HELP ME!" I screamed.
The भेड़िया who was carrying me द्वारा the scruff of my neck spoke in a muffled tone.
"Say goodbye to your precious parents kid because it's the last time you're gonna see them again."
"GO TO HE-"
I tried to finish my sentence but it was cut short when the भेड़िया hit me with a very hard object which seemed like the moon had just crash landed on my head. Everything started to fade into black as my दिल rate almost slowed to a stop, and I fell headlong into the abyss of unconscious sleep.
~
{To be continued...}
this came in a dream once about spirit heart... in his life time i took a real little peak of it. it was about his family. he had 2 pups...a wife... but thier names were unknown. just spirit heart. spirit दिल and his wife were having so much fun. but then... some भेड़िया came द्वारा from the pack. thier pack...arnt really friendly... spirit दिल was a alpha. but... he wasnt that quite powerful. one भेड़िया was above his rate... and was pure evil... i keep wondering... is it the bad wolf... from the "TWO भेड़िया CHEROKEE STORY" is it possible that he exist. impossible. then the rest of the pack came up to his family. then they murdered his pups, then they raped and killed spirit hearts wife. spirit दिल was very upset. he tried to kill them... but he was too weak. then... they strangled spirit heart.... then killed him.... and that... was the story of spirit heart. and spirit दिल was letting me look through his eyes... like i was him... it was crazy...
Well guys I'm back and I guess I'll add to another story because I've completely forgotten where I was going with HIM(The Humphrey in Me), Goodbye Pack, and the Brotherhood. So what I will do is start from scratch and make a new thing which sort of involves wolves....They're werewolves.....And it's for a मांगा I am actually deciding to create and might get published. (Have a artist as a friend....long story.) But since my pack here loves me...I thought it would be a good idea....But I want to know what आप brothers and sisters have to say....I don't mind if आप don't want me to...It's just easier because with each story I get feedback and I get better and better! So टिप्पणी दे with your thoughts...I really really would appreciate it ^.^