हे everyone this is my first लेख so if its bad plz don't hate and just tell me how I can improve. I'm open to any ideas so please leave a comment.depending on your टिप्पणियाँ will determine if I keep लेखन and sorry about spelling errors if there is any because I am लेखन this all on my iPod and the auto correct is being anoint. well here we go.
The air was fresh and crisp in Jasper park and this is were we find Lilly and her mate, Garth having a conversation...
"why not Garth"?"Because Lilly I don't think it's a good idea". "Cmon Garth don't be like that at least think about would ya"? "Fine I'll think about it and I कहा THINK about it". " Okay thank आप now u should probaly go get some food".
As Garth left the मांद, डेन to go look for food, Lilly ran over to Kate and Humphrey's. As she stepped into Kate's मांद, डेन she realized that something was different.
"Hey Kate were is Humphrey at"?
"He's out with his pals messin around, did आप ask him"?
" Ask who what"? Lilly replied.
"Garth did u ask Garth"?
"Oh! yeah I did".
" And what did he say"?
" He कहा he'll think about it, which kinda made me sad".
" it's ok I'll ask Humphrey tonight cheer up Lilly it's a big thing just give Garth a little time to think about it".
"yeah you're right thanks sis".
***GARTH***
While garth was looking for खाना he saw something out of the corner of his eye flying towards him.
"Lower the boom!"
" what the hell"?
Garth was both amazed and terrified when he saw विभाजित करें, विभक्त करें log with four wolfs soar over his head. Still dazed Garth made out the four figures that were in a ball on the floor.
"Humphrey just the guy I was looking for "
"Oh हे Barf whatcha up to"?
"nothin mutch just lookin for food, हे could I talk to आप for a sec"?
"sure go ahead".
"I meant alone."
"o ok, later guys".
Humphrey waved to his फ्रेंड्स and followed Garth.
"sooo whatcha wanna talk about"?
"well Lilly asked me this सवाल and I need advice.
"well what did she ask"?
" She wants PUPPIES".
So what'd u think please टिप्पणी दे if there is anything I can do to improve I प्यार hearing from people so please comment.
The air was fresh and crisp in Jasper park and this is were we find Lilly and her mate, Garth having a conversation...
"why not Garth"?"Because Lilly I don't think it's a good idea". "Cmon Garth don't be like that at least think about would ya"? "Fine I'll think about it and I कहा THINK about it". " Okay thank आप now u should probaly go get some food".
As Garth left the मांद, डेन to go look for food, Lilly ran over to Kate and Humphrey's. As she stepped into Kate's मांद, डेन she realized that something was different.
"Hey Kate were is Humphrey at"?
"He's out with his pals messin around, did आप ask him"?
" Ask who what"? Lilly replied.
"Garth did u ask Garth"?
"Oh! yeah I did".
" And what did he say"?
" He कहा he'll think about it, which kinda made me sad".
" it's ok I'll ask Humphrey tonight cheer up Lilly it's a big thing just give Garth a little time to think about it".
"yeah you're right thanks sis".
***GARTH***
While garth was looking for खाना he saw something out of the corner of his eye flying towards him.
"Lower the boom!"
" what the hell"?
Garth was both amazed and terrified when he saw विभाजित करें, विभक्त करें log with four wolfs soar over his head. Still dazed Garth made out the four figures that were in a ball on the floor.
"Humphrey just the guy I was looking for "
"Oh हे Barf whatcha up to"?
"nothin mutch just lookin for food, हे could I talk to आप for a sec"?
"sure go ahead".
"I meant alone."
"o ok, later guys".
Humphrey waved to his फ्रेंड्स and followed Garth.
"sooo whatcha wanna talk about"?
"well Lilly asked me this सवाल and I need advice.
"well what did she ask"?
" She wants PUPPIES".
So what'd u think please टिप्पणी दे if there is anything I can do to improve I प्यार hearing from people so please comment.
